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Question In the Night

last leaf struggles with autumn night wind - will I see the sunrise 21 Otober 2015 Questionqu Two Contest Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 11/2/2015 12:51:00 PM

Love how you show both the delicate fragilness of life (via the leaf) and our own recognizing, desperate hope that there will be more tomorrow's. Well crafted.

Edlynn Nau
Date: 11/3/2015 1:26:00 PM

So lovely to meet you as well and hope we run into each other again! :-D

Jan Terry

Date: 10/27/2015 5:23:00 PM

Hello, Kim. I was concerned about you. I have been looking for your poems in some of these contest results. Being familiar with some of your work, if I don't see your name after one of the places, I assume you didn't enter. Glad to see you placed with this thought provoking entry. I often wonder about the answer to this question when I commit my soul to sleep at night. So far, I am pleasantly surprised to wake in the morning to a new day. Congrats on your win, my friend. many hugs. Janece

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/26/2015 5:17:00 PM

Great metaphor, Kim, and so much in so few words! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/26/2015 1:25:00 AM

Short and very sweet, Kim, well done! Viv x

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 10/25/2015 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations Kim.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:28:00 PM

your one lone questionku was superb!! Congrats on the win.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/25/2015 3:33:00 PM

beautifully penned Kim sometimes so few words say so much:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/25/2015 1:28:00 PM

Simple and elegant, congratulations.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2015 6:05:00 PM

Metaphorically speaking....excellent! Hold on tight:) #7 Hugs // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/24/2015 4:35:00 PM

I believe with strong hope our difficulty will slip trough us, I might even be a threshold to triumphalism. A well and a very lovely poem. Excellent one..............A.M.

John Lawless

Date: 10/23/2015 6:42:00 PM

A metaphoric Questionku.....I like it!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2015 3:25:00 PM

I just knew that you had to know that famous song. Glad you liked it! Still loving this one you wrote. If I have time, I will try to find another of yours I have not seen yet.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/22/2015 8:09:00 AM

Superbly brilliant! A seven, dear Kim! Good luck!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/22/2015 4:16:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Kim! Always, Laura

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/22/2015 2:43:00 AM

T h is is excellent Kim! #7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2015 8:50:00 PM

Sometimes one is all you need. This ONE by itself outshines all the other ones I have seen!!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/21/2015 3:37:00 PM

Something to ponder...Are we the leaf or just watching. I have been questioning my art as well.with the low comments and views. This is very good Kim.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/21/2015 8:08:00 AM

Sentimental thought, Kim. Not many people give thought to the life span of deciduous leaves. Well done!