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Quest For Gold

painted desert lay before them hills with rings of gold and amber clay few plants, scarce water just a coyote or roadrunner on horseback they rode dreaming of hidden gold saddlebags filled with mining tools but not one nugget of treasure badlands had not been kind to them but determination still burned another excavation, another disappointment “fool’s gold” took on new meaning blistering day came to a close time to set up camp but the striated hills had eyes Dakota Tribe waited for dusk arrows flew fiercely bullets pierced the warm night air war chants accompanied thundering hooves intruders not welcome in their land two weary cowboys lay dead by morning adventurous spirits slain now just statistics in the quest for gold
*October 8, 2014

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Date: 2/14/2017 10:05:00 AM
was like a cowboy movie. get you all fired up
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:18:00 PM
a fascinating pen Carolyn congrats on win hugs
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:20:00 PM
I liked this one very much, Carolyn. Great story. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:08:00 PM
I really enjoyed this write, Carolyn! held my interest from start to end. Managed to take me back to those days when Rin Tin Tin was at the peak of popularity. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul
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Date: 10/22/2014 11:42:00 AM
A lovely write, congrats on the win,
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Date: 10/22/2014 10:43:00 AM
Lets make a movie!..cowboys and Indians! I miss those old movies. Congrats my dear LNC..BG
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Date: 10/22/2014 6:04:00 AM
captivating story Carolyn many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/21/2014 11:06:00 PM
I could just picture those arrows flying through the air at those poor cowboys. A very captivating poem Carolyn. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/10/2014 8:58:00 PM
like the story in it.. you made me remember movies with this theme.. :D GOd bless you Carolyn.. :D
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Date: 10/10/2014 2:05:00 PM
Sad fact of the old west many died but many lived..Thanks for the visits to my page..I am honored that you would fav one of my works..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2014 7:37:00 PM
now thats a treasure piece beautfully penned dear friend
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Date: 10/9/2014 12:48:00 PM
A great searching region surely with nice quest. A beautiful picture is adorned with golden pen. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/8/2014 10:38:00 PM
A fine write my friend. Should do very well in that contest.
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Date: 10/8/2014 5:17:00 PM
This is the best one of these I have read so far. Very inspiring. I am going to fav this one.
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Date: 10/8/2014 4:31:00 PM
Captivating, dramatic, exhilarating! Excellently presented story, dear Carolyn!
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Date: 10/8/2014 3:54:00 PM
Nice story, is this for the badlands contest? I've got one in that one, its not as well done as this..good luck
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