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Quaint Cottage

Beholding aspirations of the marigold sky I sailed As hushed purple dawn was rising above the bay Glinting platinum hued tides bouncing off the quay While the boat turned, in quandary of the unknown, Cognizant that discarded memories had returned To quiver bruised emotions on gold dusted ripples. Was that you, my dear, longingly saying hello From our quaint cottage on glazed verdant shore Crooning praises of your glittering rose bouquet Where gilded rays refracted, sparkling magenta vase Sitting atop embroidered tablecloth you made, Graciously standing there in welcoming poise Happy that you rearranged life, just as it once was, Having removed all clues of our interrupted past When penance of remorse sought brand new start. I recognized ruby vows you sprinkled on daybreak Bashful, as twinkles of smile glistened your face, Seductive in whiff of perfume blazing memory lane~ Indeed it was you pledging promise of a new day! February 15, 2021 Placed 3rd: Mind your P’s and Q’s poetry contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 3/10/2022 7:25:00 PM
Hi Vijay....I don't have any comment to make other than utter a "Wow".... This goes into my FAV
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:18:00 AM
Lovely Vijay. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thank you Linda for stopping by--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/6/2021 7:52:00 PM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 3/6/2021 4:23:00 PM
such lovely imagery Vijay, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan x
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:24:00 AM
Honored by your visit and comments, Jan. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 3/6/2021 9:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. You have written/painted a beautiful cottage picture. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 3/8/2021 6:23:00 AM
Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.
Date: 3/6/2021 9:37:00 AM
This is full of your trademark lush bold imagery, especially 'glinting platinum hues' and 'quaint cottage on glazed verdant shore' - thanks for entering my contest, and congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thank you Michelle. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Date: 2/24/2021 4:27:00 PM
Charming poem, beautiful imagery and great use of words with p and q.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/25/2021 4:39:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by Jennifer--much appreciate your kind remarks.
Date: 2/24/2021 11:50:00 AM
Your creative poetic soul soars in this poem and your heart and spirit always shines like a beam of light from within you and your every poem you write. Beautiful my friend. Hugs and blessings,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/8/2021 6:25:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend your delightful comments. many thanks, Jennifer.
Date: 2/23/2021 6:46:00 AM
A most impressive romantic, poem, Vijay. Imagery comes so natural to you. ~ Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/23/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Paul--much appreciate.
Date: 2/20/2021 3:10:00 PM
Back to read this wonderful piece again. Wishing you a great weekend, Vijay :)
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Date: 2/21/2021 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Date: 2/18/2021 12:34:00 PM
Very nicely done Vijay. You are a master of description. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thank you Judy for stopping by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate.
Date: 2/18/2021 9:07:00 AM
Wow such an impressive classic style poem apt for the valentine season. I was admiring your imagery and fab vocab. Kudos! ........ - - - - - - - - - Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2021 10:24:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by with your kind remarks. Many thanks. I will definitely visit your page.
Date: 2/18/2021 6:27:00 AM
Romantic apotheosis of love eternal through imagery and verses divine, dearest friend, Vijay! Fave.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2021 8:45:00 AM
So nice to hear that--especially from you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 2/18/2021 4:29:00 AM
I love your romantic verses always so full of vivid imagery Vijay! This one , anchored by a Quaint Cottage is no exception. Good Luck in the contest !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2021 5:39:00 AM
Much appreciate Mike. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 2/17/2021 8:31:00 PM
Oh my ! This is so beautiful and romantic. The images you paint are so vivid. These moments feel so real. You have created a Masterpiece my dear friend. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/18/2021 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Brandy for stopping by with your wonderful comments. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 2/17/2021 7:25:00 AM
Another stunningly lovely and romantic masterpiece, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 2/17/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 2/17/2021 6:45:00 AM
Stunning Vijay. I quite like the promise of anew day :) Linda
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2021 8:22:00 AM
Glad you stopped by Linda with your lovely comments. Many thanks--much appreciate.
Date: 2/17/2021 6:35:00 AM
You did such an amazing job on this one Vijay. I won’t wish you luck because you won’t need it. Let me be the first to congratulate you on your upcoming win. ;0)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2021 8:22:00 AM
Much appreciate Richard your vote of confidence. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 2/17/2021 4:57:00 AM
Such beauty from your pen, dear poet! I love that douse of perfume on the last verse, seductive and promising!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2021 6:34:00 AM
So very kind of you Kim. Glad your stopped by with these lovely comments. Many thanks.
Date: 2/17/2021 4:39:00 AM
Amazing poetry with beautiful imagery and lovely use of words... This will be definitely a winner... Wonderful job!!!
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:33:00 AM
Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Supraja. Many thanks.
Date: 2/17/2021 3:51:00 AM
Oh Vijay, you take me away every time you write. You don't write every day but when you do, its got all its P's and Q's in the right place. (pun intended) :) Win big this shin dig, cuz I dig it. !!!
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Date: 2/17/2021 6:32:00 AM
Appreciate your good wishes and kind remarks my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.
Date: 2/16/2021 9:34:00 PM
Your POETRY is QUITE outstanding Vijay. I will look for this in the winners circle, after the closing of the contest.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2021 6:31:00 AM
Much appreciate your vote of confidence, Harry. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 2/16/2021 1:38:00 PM
wow, this may be the prettiest one I have seen in this contest. Awesome imagery. Wish mine turned out this good (I have not posted it yet)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/17/2021 6:31:00 AM
So special to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. I am sure you have a winning entry--hope to read it soon.
Date: 2/15/2021 9:30:00 PM
I’m just in awe with this gorgeous imagery. I love every line as the flow together from your emotion... A winner for me :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/16/2021 5:19:00 AM
That is so nice to hear my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, as always. Many thanks, Akkina.
Date: 2/15/2021 4:31:00 PM
A wonderful verse, Vijay. A definite save for me. Hope you have a great week :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/16/2021 5:18:00 AM
Much appreciate Angela your kind remarks. Many thanks. Glad you liked it enough to save--thanks, again.
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