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You’re love for me, once wild and free, you seem to put on hold The time not right, in day or night, your arms will not enfold I’m left to feel the pain so real of being left alone While deep inside at eventide desire starts to roam My heart astress filled with distress at thoughts of pleasures passed Where passion burned and your heart yearned to hold me safe and fast The night aflame, unchaste, no shame, I laid bare all for you Of every thrill you got your fill and tasted honeyed dew Romanced the night till morning light, our lust we’d consummate Then quick repast to help us last, new whims to satiate We’d kiss and sigh and reach the high of passion’s trembling peak And reach as one and come undone and lie there spent and weak But now on hold, these moments, gold, you’ve turned to endless wait On hold, on hold, if truth be told, I crave this love to sate So come to me, and let us be, in lovefest intertwined Change that “on hold” and come be bold, to bed my body bind Hold on to hips and taste the lips with honey sweet and wet Unpause the time; taste the sublime, and love without regret And as you lie, contented sigh, your head on pillowed breast Your arms I'll hold, in mine, I'll fold, and let you dream and rest Eileen Manassian

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/18/2015 7:10:00 PM
Fantastic, absolutely wonderful flow, sweeping poetry at its very best my little Desert Orchid, somehow being on hold can be the best thing till those two people eventually get together. Take care, Richard
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:31:00 PM
Very sensual and romantic Eileen your erotic side came alive in this steamy write. Tastefully done.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2015 12:29:00 AM
I'm glad you find it tasteful, Michael. I do love to write on sensual themes. :) I appreciate your kind words and visit.
Date: 10/16/2015 1:55:00 PM
Certainly very "racy"...But very tasteful also. A nice balance, Eileen. Nicely done! Best regards! :) john
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2015 12:31:00 AM
Thanks, John. I'm glad you liked this. Two great adjectives that have me happy...racy and tasteful. :)
Date: 10/16/2015 12:23:00 PM
Wow! Eileen this is beautiful in every sense! Despite love and passion being on hold, you strive to bring them back to life; who can resist your words?! The poem rhymes and flows effortlessly; a pleasure to read! #7 Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/18/2015 12:32:00 AM
:) Thank you, Paul. I value your opinion. I hold it in high esteem. I'm glad you liked this. I liked the flow as well. It just...CAME...to me. ;) Hugs
Date: 10/16/2015 10:16:00 AM
It's perfect Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/16/2015 11:04:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. I'm pretty happy with how it turned out. I liked that I got those internal rhymes rhymed! ;)
Date: 10/16/2015 8:04:00 AM
The ooh la la hotsty totsy is in full force with this one Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/16/2015 11:03:00 AM
Don't rightly know what higs are.....but you get the picture. ;)
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Date: 10/16/2015 10:11:00 AM
:) I take it, you like it. I wanted to put racier images but....I had to be good. ;) Higs

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