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One line at a time Make it rhyme making it rhyme Attention supplied

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/23/2013 8:24:00 PM

Very Clever! Laura :0 )

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/17/2013 9:38:00 PM

Nicely done on this haiku. It seems i am so behind in my comments. I have not been on the soup much lately so my comments have been few. I also seem to feel uncreative at this time. Enjoying the wonderful summer. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2013 12:55:00 AM

Reminds me of that saying: line by line precept upon precept! And to let you know, the old man in my poem was dead. But I sure wonder if I interpreted it correctly from the picture I was looking at!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2013 11:36:00 PM

a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda