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Pure Beautiful

Still shedding tears over you how this heart stopped and kissed your feet it's so hard to erase those happy memories I hold them so special in my heart the sweetest thing anyone has ever done to me in my life just took my breath away totally madly in love I wished to spend the rest of my life with you saying yes we smiled together just painting my feelings always so sweet Rubbing my arms when I was cooking or even coming up behind my back hugging into me Now am I lead to believe it was all a dream when you asked me what is love I answered you in honestly how one felt then you turned kissed me Softly holding my head in your two hands my eyes when they met yours the heart will forever lovingly adore in that one moment softy stroking fingers gently holding to the cheeks you looked me straight in the eyes the most beautiful stare I have ever seen saying I love you oh how this heart melted alive in your energy

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Date: 11/6/2014 1:42:00 AM
Brilliant write, so passionate Liam... Best wishes xxx :-)
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Date: 11/3/2014 4:26:00 AM
Even the memory of love has healing powers! Excellent writing my friend! A seven!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/3/2014 4:35:00 AM
always when you write from the soul i feel you write purer wonderful comment pal passing you an auld irish blessing thank you kindly demetrios
Date: 11/2/2014 11:34:00 PM
A beautiful write from a passionate sensitive heart Liam. Just the kind of heart that makes a wonderful poet!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 11:56:00 PM
ahh connie that is so sweet thank you ever so kindly wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 11/2/2014 9:10:00 PM
The smallest gestures of love are the ones that mean the most.... When a poet writes with real emotion, the reader can truly feel it, and that happened for me here. These words are so heartbreaking.... A truly beautiful poem, my friend!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 11:53:00 PM
it's sad if the other person never saw what was held in such a vision was a life time promise under a rainbow dream just blew me away that is sad because i gave myself completely that very minute i swore this is my dream forever how life deals the cards i will never know being honest wonderful comment thank you dear pal bless you kelly
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 11:35:00 PM
you just brought a smile to my face pandita i only draw the visions i see from my soul thank you kindly for the wonderful comment god bless pal
Date: 11/2/2014 8:13:00 PM
Wow! Liam, this is another beautiful romantic write that I love! You just have the gift, my friend! Exquisite piece! Pandita
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 11:39:00 PM
sorry your comment went upwards seems to be doing that quite a bit lately
Date: 11/2/2014 7:22:00 PM
yes it does happen for that time it is true, mine-slipped slowly away also, I don't think either of us would have wanted NOT to have experienced it? Light & Love
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 11:31:00 PM
it for me was an eye opening experience being honest changes the way i look at everything wonderful comment thank you kindly debbie bless you
Date: 11/2/2014 3:39:00 PM
This is so sad dear friend..But I am sure all will be ok Liam.Heartfelt emotions!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 11:21:00 PM
sadness is the state of loosing something so beautiful touching heartfelt comment charmaine bless you dear friend
Date: 11/2/2014 8:09:00 AM
very romantic. thanks for writing this lovely poem
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 8:53:00 AM
thank you jasmine for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/2/2014 5:36:00 AM
Love perfectly described. How could anything go wrong.... I feel for you my friend... Cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/2/2014 8:57:00 AM
exactly what i thought one never really knows love is perfect always will be in my eyes tim wonderful comment pal hrartfelt

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