Provisions

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PROVISIONS

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 24 JANUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

The greedy provisions made to last him a hundred lives but failed to make any for afterlife! © Demetrios Trifiatis 24 January 2017

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Date: 1/24/2017 10:07:00 AM

The afterlife! ... would that be more beautiful than your lovely flowers? ... I doubt ... They outdo the latter ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2017 10:13:00 AM

According to Pythagoras, Socrates and Plato, afterlife will be incomparably beautiful my friend, Probir! S we have something to look forward! haha!

Date: 1/24/2017 7:47:00 AM

- Well said, my friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank you dearest, Anne-ise! Hugs!

Date: 1/24/2017 4:12:00 AM

What a shallow shell they must dwell in too! Great write, Demetrios, or should I call you Golden Tongue?

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/24/2017 10:15:00 AM

As long as you consider me your friend, you can call me any nice thing you wish my friend, White Wolf! Thank you so much for your lovely visits!