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Propinquity

The propinquity of the golden sun to the ocean of blue is like liquid butter upon pancakes, and love homespun Velvet dreams of autumn sunsets limpid Sunsets' variety of colors bold Draw many people to slow and pause Then marvel at the beauty to behold Let our autumn be worthy of applause A brillant sunset beaming through dark clouds A radiant light to lead lost weary souls to a golden sunset of which to be proud. Let past be released to cleansed future console Velvet dreams of autumn sunsets limpid Fulfill those clear, bright dreams none that's insipid Finis' Propinquity__Nearness in place;proximity Limpid_Clear and bright or transmitting light Insipid_Lacking interest, lacking taste or pertaining to food lacking flavor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/28/2014 9:45:00 AM
An awesome sonnet my friend!!! It was a joy to read this fine morning!!!
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:29:00 AM
lovely sonnet, my friend - thanks for the footnotes (I was going to look up the word propinquity)
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Date: 8/22/2014 11:25:00 AM
Definitely added to my vocabulary with this one... Liked it... as always.
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Date: 8/22/2014 7:11:00 AM
Propin what?, never heard that word before ha ha. Such a wonderful poem. love it. and learned something new. thank you for posting, just beautiful. best wishes. Pete. X.
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Date: 8/22/2014 7:07:00 AM
It is marvelous as it is, Sara! Nice to find you again!
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Date: 8/21/2014 12:09:00 PM
Lovely Sara! Short n sweet ! Hv a blessed day!
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Date: 8/21/2014 11:53:00 AM
Confused??? Did you mean to post more than this?? Now off to look up propinquity lol
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:24:00 AM
- Little things in life ..... take time to enjoy - two beautiful lines, Sara! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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