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Promise of Love

Was that real?? I raised my head and saw A flower peach in color Real and breathing Yes, she was real I looked her in the eyes Her hands twinged in mine My sight turned towards the ground A shadow in suit embraced one in a long gown As if a Disney prince just met the love of his life Moving my fingers gently through her extended hair I thought, what she was thinking while looking at the moon She seemed to love light While I was always fascinated by dark Our silence annoyed the air A chilling wave of gale blew through us Shivering, she moved her head and hand They were now resting on my chest That serenity, that peace... I can't explain   Can't believe she accepted my proposal, But what now.... hearts beating fast Thinking about future Light and dark, a perfect match? Or a mismatch? How would they get along But why not to trust love In front of which nothing else matter I whispered in her ear She lifted her head up and smiled timidly Then said, let moon and stars be our witness She closed those eyes, as I kissed her softly Moving her lashes with my lips Breathing each other's breath Time paused, as we landed in eternity 7th Sept. 2020

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Date: 1/22/2024 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/ending. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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Date: 11/4/2020 3:54:00 PM
Oh this is beautiful, I totally enjoyed it :)
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 11/21/2020 10:02:00 AM
Thank you ??
Date: 10/30/2020 11:13:00 AM
Hello Paghunda Zahid, I like this poem you crea\ted. it is filled with romance. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/28/2020 8:28:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Paghunda. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/31/2020 10:26:00 AM
Hello Paghunda Zahid,you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/31/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you Darlene
Date: 10/29/2020 9:18:00 AM
'Time paused, as we landed in eternity' - so much in love, you both knew it was meant to be - and what a cute, down to earth, romantic tale, I LOVE it and I am going to fave it. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/31/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer for your kind comment
Date: 10/25/2020 12:58:00 PM
Hey hope all is well.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/26/2020 4:28:00 AM
Hello SO, I am well. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/2020 5:01:00 AM
You make some really beautiful comparison between imagination and reality.. This is lovely poem...
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/26/2020 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.
Date: 10/11/2020 4:58:00 AM
Paghunda, this is really good, very descriptive and romantic. You're and excellent story teller.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/3/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Mark
Date: 10/11/2020 4:55:00 AM
Such a beautiful, romantic moment in time captured by your poetic talent. ~ Elaine
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 12/3/2020 10:13:00 AM
Humbled
Date: 10/10/2020 5:52:00 PM
wow, what beautiful writing. Gotta put you as a followed poet!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/26/2020 4:28:00 AM
:)
Date: 10/10/2020 12:26:00 PM
Paghunda, my heart and imagination was captivated in the bewitching spell of your beautiful love poem. I was deeply moved by the emotions and artistry of your precious pen. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/10/2020 12:37:00 PM
Ah so nice of you. It is really hard for me to believe that my poem is this good....but thank you very much. Stay blessed.
Date: 10/10/2020 9:44:00 AM
An awesome piece with splendid imagery, Paghunda:-) Congrats on your win!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/10/2020 12:38:00 PM
Thank you Edward
Date: 10/10/2020 7:16:00 AM
Paghunda, this poem is almost indescribably beautiful! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 10/10/2020 4:38:00 AM
This is a truly inspiring and enchanting write. I love how you've left so many soft whispers of imagination coloring the words and phrases... it's a love poem that gifts the reader with flames of crimson joy and passion that flickers in it's reflection. I LOVE IT. God bless you
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/10/2020 4:44:00 AM
So nice of you... Thank you!
Date: 10/9/2020 11:59:00 PM
Beautifully painted....Congrats on your win Paghunda.
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/10/2020 1:14:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/9/2020 10:22:00 PM
Sublime & superb!
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Paghunda Zahid
Date: 10/10/2020 1:15:00 AM
Humbled

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