Pretty

A name so pretty it burns pretty skin. A name that teases the soul Your image stays on my mind your so pretty I can't let go of the thought A pretty path. I feel this eternity will always remeber your name Prettier than a rose. Pretty is your name :-)

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Skat A

Date: 6/10/2013 8:30:00 PM

SIMON, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/6/2013 9:10:00 PM

You can feel the passion for this person who you feel is pretty. Looks like you are new to the soup so welcome and hope you enjoy your time with us. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2013 9:24:00 PM

Simon Very pretty. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda

Valerie The Heavy Hearted Poet

Date: 6/5/2013 4:09:00 PM

This is beautiful. Whom ever it's for is very lucky you feel that way and are able to put their beauty on display with your wonderful words. Very nice...

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/5/2013 2:31:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Simon ty for commenting on mine. This is full of passion good pen

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2013 1:27:00 PM

S.S. a lovely poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/5/2013 1:15:00 PM

Excellent feeling of love, it's really pretty one. Carry on ahead, you have talent without any doubt. Thanks.....,loved always, bl