Pray

The truth can be hid, in many ways, we don't have long, America Pray.....

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Date: 10/25/2008 8:31:00 AM

Amen! I feel we need prayers for this country too. We are living in scary times. Thank you for your contribution to "Tidbits." I concluded the poem if you would like to check out the finished piece. Let me know if you see anything that may need correcting. Keep on writing! Karen

Mc Mc

Date: 10/24/2008 10:54:00 PM

yes amen- good one!!

Ronald Bingham

Date: 10/23/2008 9:18:00 PM

We sure need some spiritual guidance. No I think what we need is to maybe let some of this bad stuff happen then maybe the truth will open some eyes and hopefully some hearts as well. We are not invincible and if we don't get it together then we are asking for what we get, always, Ron What do you think about what they are wanting to pass in California?

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/23/2008 7:01:00 PM

Truth has a way of surfacing at right moment. God Bless Phyl

Michael Torres

Date: 10/23/2008 3:50:00 PM

Very nice write and so true. Michael

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/23/2008 12:32:00 PM

This is a strong and ever so vital message to all here in America and abroad too. Very well expressed my friend, it's the right thing to do. Michael