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Poured Delight

Effervescence of sparkling champagne caressing the glass in ebullient mood euphoria. ------------------------------ Chosen p.o.t.d. 22Apr2016

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/11/2017 5:26:00 PM

It's a very nice moments of euphoria for a very young effervescence heart that brings a lot of ebullient energy. Excellently done my dear friend. An excellent 7 and congrats on POTD. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2017 9:08:00 AM

I am pleased to see you back on Soup, BL. Thank you for reading and commenting so favourably, my friend. Best regards // paul

Mark Peterson

Date: 4/30/2016 9:46:00 AM

Now here's something fully described and with meaning. I enjoyed it.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/30/2016 5:35:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Mark...and the pleasant visits I've had from you today! ~ Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/27/2016 12:08:00 PM

Congrats on POTD, my friend. I've only tried champagne once, but you make me want to give it another go with your tasty descriptions ... "caressing the glass" ... very nice!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/30/2016 5:46:00 PM

Many thanks my friend:) The ideal 'drink' is when the glass is caressed both by the drinker and by its contents...mutual satisfaction! ~ All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2016 5:30:00 PM

Fantastic metaphor for life and POTD. Awesome and congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/27/2016 12:49:00 PM

You read my poem well, Andrea! Thank you for the 'awesome' and congrats:) Regards // paul

Vera Duggan

Date: 4/24/2016 7:07:00 PM

Lovely little Tanka Paul, makes me feel like a glass, congrat's on POTD, take care......Vera

Paul Callus
Date: 4/26/2016 12:32:00 PM

Thank you Vera. Careful on the bubbly:) ~ Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/23/2016 5:32:00 PM

Back to give my Congratulations on POTD Paul! You already know I love this one. Cheers, Connie : )

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 10:34:00 AM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Connie; a 2nd visit is always appreciated:) Regards // paul

Moon Flower

Date: 4/22/2016 9:56:00 PM

Congrats on your POTD!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Moon Flower! ~ Warm regards // paul

Karam Misra

Date: 4/22/2016 8:15:00 PM

Lovely poem, Paul, brought a smile with the imagery. Almost tasted the bubbly!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 4:16:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem and the bubbly, Karam:) Pleased to have you visiting. // paul

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 4/22/2016 6:19:00 PM

Congrats on this POTD! The vision of rising bubbles is very vivid!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 3:51:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Walter; pleased to have you stopping by. // paul

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/22/2016 6:15:00 PM

Hello Paul, I'll certainly drink to that!! A "7" too!! Congratulations on POTD here!! Sparkling Champagne and its effervescence is a really neat image for your Tanka. (I recently returned to Poetry Soup after being away for a while. Great to be back.) Cheers and Best, Gary

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 3:40:00 PM

Great to have you back, Gary! I knew you had several ongoing projects; I hope that most of them have been dealt with. Thank you for enjoying my sparkling champagne:) ~ All the best....paul

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/22/2016 2:11:00 PM

Hi PaulBeautiful Tanka:

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 3:18:00 PM

Thank you, Ralph; pleased that you enjoyed. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2016 2:11:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Paul - Beautiful - hugs // Sun :)

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise; your congrats and support are appreciated:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/22/2016 11:06:00 AM

Beautiful, my dear. Simply beautiful. I see that I need to congratulate you on POTD. I'm happy it's you. Hugs.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 3:01:00 PM

Thank you for the 'beautiful' comments and congrats, Eileen:) My muse is on 'go-slow' at the moment; also finding it hard to deal with mail in my in-tray! Hugs // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/22/2016 10:59:00 AM

What year was that? Congratulations on POTD...

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 2:12:00 PM

Now you got me stumped, Charlie! I can remember the taste but not the date:) Thanks for the congrats. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2016 9:31:00 AM

Oh I do like the very odd glass of champagne Paul - a sparkling write congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 2:11:00 PM

I rarely touch champagne, Jan, but I enjoy a glass on special occasions. I much prefer red wine. Thank you for sharing this champaney poem with me:) hugs // paul

Sizwe Hlabisa

Date: 4/22/2016 7:56:00 AM

Congrats, euphoric words

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 1:49:00 PM

Thank you, Sizwe. Pleased to make your acquaintance. ~ paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/22/2016 6:32:00 AM

What a delight, dear Paul! Here's to your poetic talent, my friend! Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 1:38:00 PM

Many thanks, Demi! Thank you for a lovely visit, my friend. Regards // paul

Daver Austin

Date: 4/21/2016 2:24:00 PM

Let the bubbles go up your nose, then laugh. Love, daver

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 1:18:00 PM

I tried it Dave...and could not stop sneezing:) Thanks for a pleasant visit, my friend. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/21/2016 4:11:00 AM

Oh, I love this one Paul! Perfect description of the giddy way champagne makes one feel. #7 (This is the first time I have noticed the new "Poets I follow" link. I love it. I makes it so much easier to see when new poems are posted. Great work from the PSTeam. ; )

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 10:29:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed this champagney poem, Connie! Thank you! I noticed the new link....it facilitates things. PSTeam is doing its best to please us. ~ Regards // paul

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/20/2016 7:18:00 PM

The mood of enjoyment is in boom with friends, the way of expression is exceptional my lovely friend. My favorite poet and poem both. A great 7. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus
Date: 4/24/2016 10:23:00 AM

You are kind, BL; thank you for the generous comments, and the high rating! ~ All the best, my friend. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2016 3:36:00 PM

This is a beauty.It could easily be published in tanka journal -A fave.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/23/2016 4:14:00 PM

Thank you for the faith you show in it, Charm:) So...9.30am it is:) Goodnight....paul