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Possession

my dearest my nearest my desire seen the clearest my love my heart my dream forever sought my hope my wish my picture of bliss my aim my goal my love so many times told my precious my child mine for a little while my best my blessed my truest tenderness my kiss my carress my world nothing less my loss my gain my wisdom born in pain my turn my chance my desprite try at romance my screams my tears the death that i most feared my coveted my adorned my possession forlorned mine for a little while oh how i miss your smile

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/28/2011 8:17:00 AM

A write coming from the heart. Well done. love phyl

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 4/30/2011 5:16:00 PM

* i love the flow rhyme and depth of this * wonderful poem of love i guess to say * also there is a typo amid the title * there should be one more 's' in possession * and i am sorry it took so long to return * “Your Kind Com John” * but “Thank You” for it and i love this stirring poem * warm regards always * sarah

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/27/2011 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week John III. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2011 4:45:00 AM

Deeply romantic piece John expressing the wonderful luv forever for someone so special ..still hurting from the great loss..so lovely to have this memory instilled in u to share with us all my friend with luv..

Lisa Cooper

Date: 4/26/2011 4:53:00 PM

great piece

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/26/2011 7:50:00 AM

Congrats on being featured this week . A Great write. Happy Birthday John

Marcus Antwan

Date: 4/25/2011 7:39:00 PM

Congrats on your poem being featured. I really enjoyed this poem because it has the two things that resonate with me: rhyme and rhythm. this poem is very musical and you've given your rhymes some powerful meaning.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/25/2011 11:54:00 AM

hey you and I are both featured this week on page 2, double congrats! :-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/25/2011 7:57:00 AM

Congrats John on your featured poem this week on P.S. ..a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/25/2011 7:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, john

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 7:50:00 PM

here you are John, hello and how are you... a very deep deep... way to be owned... sadly i know how it is not able to let go... enjoyed your poem,,.p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2011 1:32:00 PM

Such a touching poem, dear friend. It's so sad when all your dreams come to an unexpected halt. Stay strong, John. Have a blessed Easter. Love, Carolyn

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/19/2011 4:20:00 PM

such an outpouring of grief, and that dream...it's still very raw...

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/19/2011 3:57:00 PM

sad poem, very blue-bleak...

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/19/2011 7:38:00 AM

i dreampt of April this morning. i noticed her hair was golden. and it was braided in a way i never seen on earth. i think it was Gods way of letting me know that it was real.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/18/2011 8:33:00 PM

strikingly engaging, john... huggs, nette