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snap snap chew chew snap,chew puff...*pop* snap snap snap chew chew chew puffffpuff......*Popp* snap, snap, snap, snap, chew..chew...chew...... puuuffff, pufffff, puff mmmm, mmmhhh, yook't it. **POP!!**
Uh oh! For the contest: Bubbles Placement: Honorable Mention

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Date: 9/15/2011 8:07:00 AM
So nice, well done. Congrats on your HM. Lee
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Date: 9/13/2011 6:23:00 PM
CONGRATS PAULA ON YOUR HM IN BUBBLES CONTEST MY FRIEND.. ENJOY HONOR LUV..
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:03:00 PM
A jolly little ditty too! Congrad's Paula now go wild with unmentionables think of something no one else will I KNOW you can! light & love
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bubbles"contest Paula. Love,Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:33:00 PM
hey Paula congrats on your win, i really like this one..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 3:25:00 PM
So creative and witty, Paula. I love it! Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:53:00 PM
Cute one..I can just see the scene..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:38:00 PM
AWESOME!!
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:18:00 PM
Clever and fun write! Best wishes for the contest! Kim
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Date: 9/9/2011 2:47:00 PM
you had me thinking now what could it be and at first I thought rice krispies but then noticed the bubbles contest. Love Phyl
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