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Point of No Return

He loved her very much (or so he said), waiting for her every day with a gift, His handsome face and cajolery led her to trust him, a young woman adrift; And then one day, they had a major fight, he said sorry but she refused to talk, He seethed within, longing to make it right, Still, each time he tried, she would simply balk; That fateful day, he tried to address her, Yet, she would not cast him a second glance, His pent up anger welled in him further as he stabbed her neck in a mad, rash trance; Every life is precious and God-given, And a murderous deed once done is done, If he repents, he may be forgiven, Yet, he's entered that point of no return. ----------------------- 10.12.16

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Date: 1/7/2017 10:05:00 PM
POINT OF NO RETURN IS A BAD, BAD PLACE TO BE.. You do dark poetry very well! Great verses! A7
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Date: 12/16/2016 9:50:00 AM
Congrats Jo !! Nicely portrayed! Well done. Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 12/12/2016 6:13:00 PM
Scary and so sad what some people can do to others. Such a serious problem in a society that has lost it's way long ago. God Bless.
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:27:00 PM
Several poems on the site have dealt with domestic violence. The woman has been stabbed. Good luck with your poem.
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Date: 12/11/2016 3:35:00 AM
God may forgive him my dear friend, Jo but me, being a human, cannot forgive him for he has destroyed one of God's creations! A seven!
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Date: 12/10/2016 3:04:00 PM
WoW! Jo, I wasn't expecting that at all. But this type of thing happens all the time. It's so sad that in a fit a rage a person could do such an evil act. This piece felt so real. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/10/2016 8:15:00 AM
Jo Daniel you have explained this issue very well. What a powerful message. Well done.
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