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Poetry Defined

My words collected on a line Attempt my subject to define Spilling forth these thoughts of mine Laid before the reader who Flowing like a velvet wine Tastes the words anew Do they to the reader speak Please the audience I seek Or is my writing too oblique Leaving those who read to muse Perhaps again I have to tweak The words that I use For every writer knows that they Hope the verse that they display Pictures to the mind convey Trips of fantasy promote Imaginations freely play Just from the words they wrote Written in Scottish Stanza or six line stave, a style inspired by Margaret Fosters poem Mirran

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Date: 10/30/2011 3:10:00 PM
I like this it is very unique! thanks! ...EKL.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/31/2011 8:28:00 AM
And thank you for commenting Ehlana
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/30/2011 10:45:00 PM
And thank you
Date: 10/24/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest BoB. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/31/2011 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/24/2011 2:13:00 PM
Thanks very much Carol
Date: 10/23/2011 4:52:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, your words certainly speak to this reader :-)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/23/2011 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte. Very kind of you to say
Date: 10/23/2011 1:15:00 AM
Very nice Bob!Congrats on your win.Thanks for your congratulatory message at my page.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/23/2011 10:08:00 PM
You're welcome and thank you kash
Date: 10/22/2011 8:58:00 PM
Congrats Bob on a super fantastic win with this exciting enry luv.. enjoyed reading...
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/22/2011 10:24:00 PM
I appreciate that Linda-Marie
Date: 10/22/2011 2:26:00 PM
congrats on your win.cory
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/22/2011 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Cory
Date: 10/22/2011 1:21:00 PM
Congrats, Bob. Excellent. Nice going. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/22/2011 10:25:00 PM
Will do. Thanks
Date: 10/15/2011 3:00:00 AM
This is a cool form to read. I really enjoy these kinds of poems where the poet ponders the effectiveness of his words on the reader!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/15/2011 9:26:00 AM
I enjoyed writing this one. Never tried this poetry form before.
Date: 10/14/2011 2:35:00 PM
We all feel what you have written. Nice use of Scottish Stanza in this write. God Bless Phyl
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/14/2011 3:00:00 PM
I think you're right Phyl. Thanks for stopping by
Date: 10/13/2011 3:06:00 PM
Yes, feeling we all have. Well crafted piece. Many congrats on your wins too, my friend : )
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/14/2011 3:01:00 PM
Yes, we do Jack.
Date: 10/12/2011 5:46:00 PM
Nice summary of writing's pleasures. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/13/2011 10:47:00 AM
Thanks Matt
Date: 10/11/2011 8:13:00 PM
the concern of every poet put in a nice manner..
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/11/2011 11:01:00 PM
Agreed
Date: 10/11/2011 4:53:00 PM
yeah,you really defined poetry in this piece..lovely
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/11/2011 4:56:00 PM
Many thanks for stopping by
Date: 10/11/2011 3:23:00 PM
I love your poetry Bob.You are a wonderful poet.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 10/11/2011 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Kash

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