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Poetry Beneath the Trees

i sit here alone in the woods the trees seem less full than my mind as they blush at me sunset like beneath autumn's wind the squirrel hurries along her way gathering nuts. as i gather thoughts i pause and breathe deep this cool air around me and i lose myself in nature my muse sings with the last of the birds nested in trees ready to take flight and i write poetry i am calm as my thoughts fall like little leaves beneath the wind i strip myself of colored thoughts and deep rooted pain like the trees i stand naked and free of weight i see more clearly the deer as they sneak past me i close my book and head home another day ends another poem born in the woods contest 9/6/13

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Date: 10/14/2013 11:12:00 PM
Love this poem Sandra, It was so true. I was drawn right into your poem.It is lovely. " Through Hardship To The Stars my friend ."
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:12:00 AM
Well Sandra, I just don't know what to say anymore. The trees blush at you? Lordy me...I find it amazing that someone as young as you could have such wisdom and insight...Obviously you have been through a thing or two in your lifetime and I am absolutely thrilled and proud to see you entering and winning contests - Tim
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Date: 10/1/2013 8:37:00 PM
lovely win............SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:32:00 PM
Absolutely lovely...congratulations....
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:06:00 AM
congrats on your win - I like the occasional rhyme sprinkled throughout and the overall feeling of calm that the piece conveys, and also the way you've used the theme to tell of the process of creating poetry :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 12:19:00 AM
I'm very happy this got on the top three.It is a very well deserved win and one of my favorites on the list. Congrats to you!
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:37:00 PM
Gosh, this is awesome. congrats on a great win. BG
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:37:00 PM
Gosh, this is awesome. congrats on a great win. BG
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Date: 9/30/2013 3:31:00 PM
congrats on your win Sandra....lovely write
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:11:00 PM
thank you Joseph :)
Date: 9/30/2013 1:09:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for your lovely entry. It was one of my favorites, as I know the feelings you describe in it very well....the calm and focus. Loved it!
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:10:00 PM
thank you so much Caleb for the kind words and win...I feel honored to stand right beneath Andrea and Carrie... Hugs :)
Date: 9/30/2013 12:03:00 PM
Sandra, such a lovely win......Linda
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:12:00 PM
thank you so much Linda....hugs :)
Date: 9/30/2013 11:40:00 AM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Sandra. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:13:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...I has no idea they were in yet, hugs :)
Date: 9/21/2013 2:16:00 PM
Yes, being alone in nature can inspire greatness, such as in the poem. I especially liked the last 2 lines.
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:11:00 PM
thank you so much Wayne...I have always loved the peace and quiet nature often has to offer :)
Date: 9/8/2013 3:11:00 PM
this is fantastic. The perfect kind of free verse for me, easy to read and yet reflective and so interesting.
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Date: 9/30/2013 4:10:00 PM
thank you so much Andrea....hugs :)
Date: 9/7/2013 3:49:00 PM
If this poem is the result, amazing and yes beautiful
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/7/2013 8:15:00 PM
thank you...it started as a teen, somehow being alone with nature has always inspired my muse...have a great weekend! Hugs :)
Date: 9/7/2013 2:19:00 PM
this such a serene write that i can imagine myself lounging there with you,sandra... awesome!..:) hugggs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/7/2013 8:18:00 PM
Thanks Nette, .nature has always inspired my poetry so I now carry a book with me when I go in the woods, or on the trail, or by the creek... have a great weekend! Hugs
Date: 9/6/2013 9:12:00 PM
Your poem gives me the real sensation of meditating in the woods. You employ elegant and vivid imagery. I look forward to reading more. And, if you liked my contest poem, I have some others you might enjoy to read as well. Sincerely, Alex
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so much Alex....have a great weekend...hugs :)
Date: 9/6/2013 2:34:00 PM
I love this nature poem. I can see you sitting creating your poem under the trees. AWESOME. love phyl
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:19:00 PM
Thank you Phyllis...have a great weekend! Hugs
Date: 9/6/2013 2:17:00 PM
love this, my friend
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Jack....hugs to a beautiful weekend :)
Date: 9/6/2013 1:12:00 PM
Sandra, I love the descriptive language in this. Very well written. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim...have a great weekend! Hugs :)
Date: 9/6/2013 11:54:00 AM
THAT WAS EXTREMELY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED OH GOOD LUCK IN THE WOODS
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Date: 9/7/2013 8:36:00 PM
Thank you....I hope you have a great weekend! Hugs :)

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