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Poetic Form: Concrete
Inspired: 2024 April 14
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"I start in life as a plus-a servant does good
In life I add up as a plus-a faithful servant
Here go~I minus from Earth~H e a v e n - b o u n d,"
... by the Poet
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Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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