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Plenty More Fish In the Sea

they said don,t you cry she,s no worth it there,s plenty more fish in the sea yet here i am i,m still crying cos what good are fishes to me i once was a really good fisherman i had more than 1 fish in my net but its true what they saythe one that gets away is the one that you never forget

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April Gabriella

Date: 8/24/2013 11:37:00 PM

I agree with That Archaic Poet, this does need polishing. But the sentiment is great and I love what you have going on in the first stanza.

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 8/24/2013 4:03:00 PM

Hi, Thomas. I'm not really sure if the commas in the contractions are intentional or not; they throw me off a bit. In your first line, you need to edit "no" to "not". You have a really good piece going here but it needs some polishing. I think you should rework the last line. I'm also not sure if you meant for the "I's" to be lower case. I would also rework the second line of the second stanza. The last two lines are awesome; they anchor it together. With some polishing you will have a good poem

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/24/2013 4:05:00 PM

*I mean you should rework the last line of the first stanza. I like the sentiment in this piece :)