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plenty more fish in the sea

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plenty more fish in the sea

they said don,t you cry she,s no worth it 
there,s  plenty more fish in the sea
yet here i am i,m still  crying
cos  what good are fishes to me

i once was a really good fisherman
i had more than 1 fish in my net
but its true what they saythe one that gets away
is the one that  you never forget

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  1. Date: 8/24/2013 11:37:00 PM
    I agree with That Archaic Poet, this does need polishing. But the sentiment is great and I love what you have going on in the first stanza.

  1. Date: 8/24/2013 4:03:00 PM
    Hi, Thomas. I'm not really sure if the commas in the contractions are intentional or not; they throw me off a bit. In your first line, you need to edit "no" to "not". You have a really good piece going here but it needs some polishing. I think you should rework the last line. I'm also not sure if you meant for the "I's" to be lower case. I would also rework the second line of the second stanza. The last two lines are awesome; they anchor it together. With some polishing you will have a good poem

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    Date: 8/24/2013 4:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *I mean you should rework the last line of the first stanza. I like the sentiment in this piece :)