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Pleasure Becomes a Pain - a Tribute To Lord Byron

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( The poem is based on the biographical details with quotes of Lord Byron the renaissance poet. The poem is Stand By Me appeal to the criticism of Byron being an outspoken, atheist and passionate poet) By accident his left leg was twisted Mary nursed it though he resisted. A day came when Mary died and Her dying words about him were at the end “All for the love of the child, she nursed in lieu” He said then, “I can put on a simple shoe” He asked himself, “Why should I weep? Her matchless spirit sweeps In the shade of her bower I remember the hours We shall meet In this rural retreat Now we will see each other no more One last look what we were before” Pleasure became a pain to him At the sight of people’s screams. +++ January 21, 2015 Form: Rhyme Fifth Place win Contest: Stand By Me

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Date: 2/16/2015 1:18:00 AM
Dr Ram, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:18:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Dr Mehta :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 2:24:00 PM
It was nice to see this great entry from my "Stand By Me" contest. I enjoyed it once again, Dr. Ram. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:42:00 PM
Dr Ram:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/28/2015 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram! What a great tribute.
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:36:00 PM
Nicely done, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2015 10:02:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem to honor this amazing poet. Congratulations Dr. Ram!
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Date: 1/25/2015 7:21:00 AM
Wonderful tribute... congrats on the win...
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Date: 1/24/2015 7:42:00 PM
None of us are perfect and those who can except us for who we are, are the only friends we will ever need... A very noble tribute to one of the poetic greats, Lord Byron. Well done, Dr. Ram! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:53:00 PM
Great tribute - many congrats Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2015 5:32:00 PM
Any tribute to Lord Byron is favored by me as he is my favorite poet. Well written Dr. Ram!
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Date: 1/21/2015 4:00:00 PM
One of your better works< Dr Ram! Brilliantly written! Just for the History of it Byron died at Messologi ( 19 April 1824)a town that my family comes from, during the Greek revolution. I am certain that my great-great-grandfather who was fighting there at the time had seen him! A seven!
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:49:00 PM
An amazing poem Ram. I have not read a poem like this. The reason, perhaps is, that I have been missing out your work lately as I have not been a visitor to poetrysoup for sometime. I intend to remove this lapse in order to benefit from your brilliant thoughts. -Mohammad
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