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Please Exist - I

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Please Exist - I

The World is Too Big For Just Two People:

To The Girl Who Showed Me That Love is
Always Relevant.

To The Girl Who Found Me Through Swarms
Of Flesh.

To The Girl Who Explained That Love and Life,
Can Only Ever Be Relative.

To The Girl Whose Glance Sends an Icy Prickle
Shimmering Across My Skin.

For The Girl Who Taught Me, That If You Couldn't
Feel a Persons Heart Beating Against Your Chest,

... They Weren't Close Enough.

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  1. Date: 5/3/2010 7:49:00 AM
    You were right, the end of your poem links with mine :) and you wrote this ages ago! You know i heard somewhere that great minds think alike ;) I also appreciate how you wrote 'For' as apposed to 'To' this girl in the last lines :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 7:11:00 AM
    "The World is Too Big For Just Two People" left me spluttering... simply perfect, Blaze. I love you.

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 2:50:00 PM
    Those last 3 lines are incredible, awesome work...Raul