Pisces

Psychic mind, unlike a clairvoyant who often misreads, Intelligent-- more intuitive kind-- than quantum theory, Surprising to anyone who underestimates a dreamer Creatively interpreting life, often an abstract painting, Emotionally brush-stroked on meaningful soul-fabric, Sensitively divulging sage-wisdom in tacit vocabulary. March 31, 2021 Placed 1st: A Brian Strand July 3 Contest Placed 3rd: Star sign premium poetry contest Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2022 5:48:00 AM

Congrats on your high winner. Way to go. I enjoyed reading about Pisces. Your visit to my page was enlightening. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 1/9/2022 6:20:00 AM

Amazing brevity with fathomless depth ! Love this Vijay!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2021 12:30:00 PM

Lovely to read this again Vijay, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2021 9:21:00 AM

Back with congrats again. I did not get a win for Virgo in that first contest. I wonder if I should try it in an acrostics contest of Brian's! Yours is always a winner!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/14/2021 12:02:00 PM

Vijay, your wording and images always amaze me. They are full of life like a life giving river. They inspire me to dig deeper into the wisdom of words. Congratulations on your win. This is truly marvelous. All the best. Blessings to you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/20/2021 5:15:00 AM

So very kind of you to say so, Sam. Means a lot coming from a brilliant writer. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/11/2021 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and information. Have a blessed day...........

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2021 2:07:00 PM

Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 4/11/2021 3:43:00 AM

Very well done! great choice of words! A win well deserved!! congrats!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2021 5:32:00 AM

Much appreciate Krish--many thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2021 2:41:00 PM

Excellent acrostic Vijay, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/11/2021 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 4/10/2021 1:27:00 PM

Many congratulations dear Vijay for your top win in Charlotte's contest. I too am a Piscean and that is why I love to escape into my poetry. A wonderful poem you have penned. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2021 2:11:00 PM

Glad you liked the poem my friend. I am sure in some respects we must think alike being of the same sign. Much appreciate, Ann. Many thanks.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/10/2021 12:41:00 PM

a well written, different take on pisces which is also deep and profound; i like that you avoided just merely listing the traits of the sign - congrats on your win in my contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2021 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Charlotte for holding contests and taking the time to write meaningful comments. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/8/2021 6:48:00 AM

How did you define me so well Vijay!! Love your Piscean prose!! well done!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2021 12:26:00 PM

Your sign as well I take it. We think alike my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2021 4:59:00 PM

you really do fit your sign, Vijay!!! Good one for you!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/6/2021 5:46:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Josefina Costales

Date: 4/4/2021 12:00:00 AM

Hmm- a poem using acrostic for the star sign contest seems a formidable task but yours is seamless and the thoughts are imaginative. Nice.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/4/2021 5:39:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Josefina. Many thanks.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/3/2021 10:11:00 AM

Beautifully done Vijay. An excellent entry for the contest. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. Praise The Lord! He Is Risen! JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2021 10:56:00 AM

Thank you Judy. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/2/2021 4:11:00 PM

Excellent, Vijay, vividly descriptive. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2021 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/2/2021 2:03:00 PM

WoW! Vijay, This is an amazing acrostic for a Pisces. Thanks for a sharing a glimpse of you. Best wishes in the contest. My late father was a Pisces and my birthday was 14 days after his. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/3/2021 5:28:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments. You have a wonderful weekend as well, Alexis. And Happy Birthday (belated or otherwise).

Angela Crabtree

Date: 4/1/2021 4:29:00 PM

A perfect Acrostic for a Pisces. A definite fave. Hope you have a great weekend, Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2021 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Angela for your kind feedback. Much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2021 8:10:00 AM

These six lines show your creativity, Vijay. Poetry is not just what you say, but how you say it! Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/2/2021 5:41:00 AM

So very kind of you, Paul. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/1/2021 3:18:00 AM

A rare look into Man's soul! Outstanding Acrostic dearest, Vijay! Stay safe!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2021 5:35:00 AM

That is very special coming from you my friend. Many thanks Demetrios. Much appreciate, as always.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/31/2021 5:22:00 PM

"A dreamer, sage-wisdom in tacit vocabulary" Yes, I completely agree. You paint such vivid images with your words, my dear friend. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2021 5:34:00 AM

Thank you my dear friend--always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks, Brandy.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/31/2021 10:50:00 AM

What a beautiful sign, I was born on March 6, so I am a pisces, mom would say to me when I was young, your like the fishes in the sea, you come and you go with a mind of your own. How I miss her. Thankyou for this lovely poem today, winning wishes, and God speed :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2021 5:33:00 AM

Your poems are often reflective of the compliments your Mom bestowed upon you my friend. She is proud of you up there in heaven! Thank you for your kind remarks. Many thanks, Vienna.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2021 8:12:00 AM

Vijay, I'm a water sign too. Moon Children get along well with Pisces and your sign is known well for the traits you describe so beautifully in your poem. Best wishes for a big win, my friend! Have a nice Easter. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2021 5:30:00 AM

Happy Easter to you, Carolyn. People friendly and sensitive--you are a jewel of the water sign my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.