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Pinkctober

One suffers from cancer but given a negative result Or medical team treating fails to a make a diagnosis Giving open ground to cancer to grow One suffers from cancer and given a positive result Either one was late to see the doctor or a wrong one Giving open ground to cancer to grow. Physicians specializing mammography, err about 3% But other physicians failed to identify 71 % Giving open ground to cancer to grow. Sometimes doctors are careless and negligent Sometimes the patients are so Giving open ground to go to God. ================================ Dr. Ram Mehta Fifth Place Win Contest: Pinkctober by P.D. * I dedicate this poem to persons suffering from Breast Cancer presently.

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Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 10:31:00 PM

Dr., , lovely impressive win................ SKAT :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 1:58:00 PM

Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- DR RAM --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA

Robin Davis

Date: 10/26/2013 8:56:00 AM

Dr. Ram This is an interesting write on a terrible disease. It educates the reader and keeps them enthralled all the way through. Nice job. Good luck in the contest. I also entered. Glad you enjoyed my Life On Stage poem.

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/25/2013 3:05:00 PM

A strong and thoughtful write Dr Ram, I hope you will succeed in raising awareness and spirits of those sufferers...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/24/2013 7:46:00 AM

Question: Why doctors generally do not believe in God? Answer: Because they dread the thought that they will meet all those who have sent on the other side! Terrible truths that unfortunately are truths!Great work of substance, Dr. Ram!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2013 9:28:00 PM

I really enjoyed what you said at the end of this. I hope all those who have to endure so much suffering will be able to find their way to heaven.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/23/2013 9:22:00 PM

Interesting facts that I did not know. I enjoy the hopeful ending.

David Fisher

Date: 10/23/2013 7:42:00 PM

This is so wonderfully written, albeit about the reality that is cancer, and hopefully the timely treatment.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/23/2013 10:37:00 AM

Wow! A very good one and love how explicit it is.I enjoyed this piece of yours. Nice to have them in mind. Kudos!

Allan Koven

Date: 10/23/2013 10:36:00 AM

Yes, it happens. However, one of the big problems with Cancer Care is the attitude of the Physician. Bernie Siegel wrote Love, Medicine and Miracles and I agree that the Doctors bedside manner helps determine how the patient sees hope or despair for himself or herself. Allan

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/23/2013 8:39:00 AM

Wonderfully written poem with a needed message.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/23/2013 7:41:00 AM

This is a tremendous write about cancer my friend! Thank you for sharing this enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/23/2013 7:19:00 AM

These verses are wisely penned and with a great message.Tnks for stopping by my humble verse

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2013 6:42:00 AM

- A very well written poem. - We need skilled doctors at specialty cancer. - Always nice to read your poems Dr. Ram. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)