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Pin the Tail

PIN THE TAIL O’Haggard Hoarfrost, she plays winks, rocks on a sawhorse, tweedle-dee drinks. Mad Merrie O’Boyle slays lightning from nails — dazed loony-toon, wears out his flannel tails. W’cked, their niece, says, “Take them away,” bickers, with Midnight Judge in his moonwashed-knickers. Their nephew, hees and haws, a blinking donkey-in-law. O’Haggard and Merrie pinned his tail on his sacred flaws. Force-swept, Hoarfrost and O’Boyle, under-dressed, spoiled with lots of off-the-rocker friends to impress. W’cked and her donkey are still looking for his appendage. Facial features are pinned-up on the craziest stages. 5/29/2021

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Date: 5/31/2021 1:00:00 PM
Delightful and amusing writing, my dearest friend, Kim. Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2021 6:12:00 PM
Thank you :) Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 5/31/2021 10:52:00 AM
Hello Kim, it is hard to pin the tail on the donkey. I never pinned the tail in the right place. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2021 10:58:00 AM
Hello Kim, Exactly. I remember everyone having a hard time to pin the tail on the donkey. Hugs Darlene
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2021 6:13:00 PM
Exactly! LOL. Hugs ~
Date: 5/31/2021 1:14:00 AM
A merry-go-round of funny situations. Great sense of humor. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/31/2021 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 5/30/2021 5:02:00 PM
Ha, ha! A barrel of monkeys here, Kim. Thanks for the pure pleasure of reading this one. ~ Pinned
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/30/2021 7:10:00 PM
lol! Thanks :) I needed a lil crazy

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