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Pieces of paper and pieces of strings. Everywhere we can find pieces of things. Pieces of cake, fruits, chocolates, and meat and so many other good foods we can eat. Sweet pieces of heaven and pieces of earth! But pieces of some things have little worth. There are pieces of cardboard, puzzles, and ice, furniture, clothing, and even advice. Pieces of wood and of mere plastic too are screwed onto things or put on with glue. We get pieces of jewelry, money and art. but only one piece of (if not one’s whole) heart! Sometimes a person more than releases - He picks, pulls or tears or smashes to pieces! Folks fall to pieces, but as for me, it’s “thrilled to pieces” I wish to be!

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Date: 3/27/2013 9:41:00 PM
Nice write on this poem and see it is a winner. CONGRATS my friend. love phyl
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Date: 3/26/2013 8:48:00 PM
Great write here good flow.
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:35:00 AM
Good luck in the contest - Each one of us will be "thrilled to pieces" if they wiin. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/19/2013 9:18:00 AM
Yes and pieces of Humpty dumpty. This is what I thought of while reading your clever poem. Then I got very confused, and......sputt! Love it. daver
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Date: 3/18/2013 12:45:00 PM
i knew this was a winner! congratulations on a delightful poem...
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Date: 3/18/2013 12:52:00 AM
This is such a marvelous write my dear friend Andrea! My hearty congratulations on your grand win! Happy Patrick's Day! love always, Leonora
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Date: 3/17/2013 2:43:00 PM
Terrific write and win Andrea! Hugs
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Date: 3/17/2013 9:43:00 AM
yihaa!!! congrats in the big win :)
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Date: 3/16/2013 12:23:00 PM
Hello Andrea, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD
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Date: 3/15/2013 9:39:00 PM
Love the way it rhymes,,, I put up my new poem ;}Lilith
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Date: 3/15/2013 10:32:00 AM
Good poem , congrats on the win
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Date: 3/15/2013 10:12:00 AM
Oh WOE is me! i could not think of one thing....and YOU have captured entire lives....Kudos!
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Date: 3/15/2013 9:11:00 AM
A very good write, Andrea. Simple and enjoyable :) how have u been?
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Date: 3/15/2013 7:26:00 AM
So well done, I enjoyed reading again.
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Date: 3/15/2013 1:16:00 AM
I fell to pieces and was thrilled to pieces at the same time with this gem Andrea!...Congratulations my friend! - Tim
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Date: 3/14/2013 9:12:00 PM
Cute. There are also good pieces of poetry - this being one. Congrats on your win. Joe
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Date: 3/14/2013 7:49:00 PM
Great poem Andrea, Congratulations on your win, Am paying you back on my pieces though, jewellery, lol. Take care, Regards Richard
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Date: 3/14/2013 7:11:00 PM
You certainly covered all of the pieces. Congratulations on your big win again Andrea. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/14/2013 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea! I like your light ones!
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Date: 3/14/2013 3:28:00 PM
Congrats Andrea....I knew it would be the winner....great job
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:31:00 PM
An upbeat write. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/14/2013 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. An excellent poem Andrea. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 3/14/2013 1:01:00 PM
You say it all..well done :) fantastic poem you penned my dear Andrea..super Congratulations on your first placed in Susan's Contest. Hugs, Maria
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Date: 3/14/2013 11:58:00 AM
Lovely pen... cONGRATS ON your win~~ A.O
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Date: 3/14/2013 9:30:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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