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Pickles and Tickles

I'm going to free that pickle from the jar
Free for a minute but it won't get very far
In my mouth as the juices flow
Down the hatch here you go
Poor pickle was gone before I got to the car

Faleshia Murphy
FOR P.D. contest 

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  1. Date: 4/27/2011 10:35:00 AM
    Just stopping by today to thank you for all your kinds comments Faleshia. So glad to hear from you been a long time my friend. Linda-Marie has been asking about you also please stop by and see her and let her know how you are doing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/15/2011 8:07:00 AM
    What a cute limerick! If you won in a contest with this entry, then congratulations!

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 10:41:00 AM
    Faleshia, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 9:10:00 PM
    very cute, Faleshia. I enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 1:48:00 PM
    Mouth watering Limerick Faleshia, congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 10:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Faleshia in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/15/2010 9:26:00 AM
    Cute humor Faleshia. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 8:01:00 AM
    Congrats Faleshia on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful Limerick luv... so cute to read.. enjoy your sweet success and victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv my friend.. hope all is well with u and u are happy...

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 6:27:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/14/2010 4:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on this well deserv ed win, faleshia

  1. Date: 11/2/2010 2:38:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 10/24/2010 6:31:00 PM
    so turned on right know.

  1. Date: 10/19/2010 8:27:00 PM
    Smiles Good luck in PD's comp ... loved your limerick with a twist ... and many thanks for your kind comment on my poem love Jayne

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 3:42:00 PM
    Hi Faleshia I don't like pickles but I liked this,it tickled my funny bone.Good luck in the contest. luv June(sylvia)

  1. Date: 10/17/2010 12:07:00 AM
    Good one, Faleshia. So true for the pickle lovers out there!! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 8:36:00 PM
    Cute one Faleshia.. good luck in the contest... your title must be the name of the contest luv.. Pickles and Tickles.. its the same for all entries .. so don't get disqualified ..luv.. change now.. and good luck luv..

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 5:58:00 PM
    Great limerick here Faleshia! It has a very good flow to it. Best wishes in the contest~Chris

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 5:04:00 PM
    love it sorry had to read and comment it ahead of time...i was trying to skip it,,sorry could not, Enjoyed,, love the super smile on this one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 4:21:00 PM
    cute one Faleshia, good luck in the contest

  1. Date: 10/16/2010 3:27:00 PM
    Very nice entry to the contest, very humorous, who is more tricky?, faleshia