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PERPETUAL DARKNESS

FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

Running after a life of carnal pleasures condemns one's soul into perpetual darkness! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 29 September 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/29/2016 2:20:00 PM
My Dear Wise Man Demetrios, 100% agreed ! Sensory pleasures are ephemeral and hollow and are a big hurdle in the path of eternal bliss.....this is what I feel....Well, Your poems make me think....a 7! for this beauty:) Your roof garden is colourful, love, Anu:)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much dearest, Anu, for your lovely comments and for your generosity! I do appreciate your visits!
Date: 9/29/2016 9:30:00 AM
Hi Demetrios, Your monoku's are filled with great wisdom. I must say that I agree my wise friend. A Big seven: -) Alexis
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:18:00 PM
You too kind and generous my dear, Alexis. Thank you so much!
Date: 9/29/2016 9:01:00 AM
I wonder why it holds such allure? Your writing causes one to ponder.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 12:21:00 PM
My good friend, Richard, my goal is to pass a message of a different kind that people today do not listen to. How successful I am you, the poets, are going to tell me. Thank you!
Date: 9/29/2016 8:25:00 AM
I so agree. Too many seek this path. The messages sent to our children need to get stronger.
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:59:00 AM
Timotheos, how wonderful to receive your visit and truly important comment! Yes, our children deserve better! Thank you!
Date: 9/29/2016 7:33:00 AM
Advisory in Monoku is always enjoyable ...
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Date: 9/29/2016 7:38:00 AM
Advise well... taken my goof friend, Probir! Thank you!
Date: 9/29/2016 6:30:00 AM
so true, demetrios... your words enlighten the soul!..huggs
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Date: 9/29/2016 7:24:00 AM
nette, my dear,so nice to see you! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment!
Date: 9/29/2016 5:41:00 AM
- Love is not about carnal desires ..... in today's society is all about carnal desires - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Keith Logan
Date: 9/29/2016 6:09:00 AM
Love is a giving thing. Between two people it is all about putting the interests of the other person above those of your own.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 5:48:00 AM
True my dearest friend! Thank you so very much for your precious visits and comments!
Date: 9/29/2016 5:35:00 AM
So true... Wise Monoku and beautiful flowers from your graden...A big 7...
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/29/2016 5:47:00 AM
How wonderful to see you again dear, Supraja. Thank you for your kind visit and grading!

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