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Perfect Woman

Perfect Woman

Enough has been said about the perfect woman in the past
Like she is like the Spring among seasons and Rose among blooms,
And  a Minister in managing house and a Whore in bed

But my perception changed over time to see her in new light
As Salt in the soup or in a bruise, as the case may be
Or as 4G in technology or even as Sky among illusions

It further evolved  to perceive perfection in one
Who is like pouring rain in summer’s searing night
And has mothered a brood of at least six without a thought.

14 Feb 13

S.Jagathsimhan Nair 

For "The perfect woman" contest  of Michael Smith

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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 6:37:00 AM
    Jag; This will go good in the contest. I like how you described the perfect Woman.Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:36:00 PM
    I went back to read his rules and he had said for us to put our names, but I swear I never saw that rule when I was reading it the first time. I need to remember to HIGHLIGHT those kinds of rules if I make them in my own contests!!

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 11:35:00 PM
    Some great images in this one, Jag. Hey, just the other day the judge of this contest did a blog saying that we had to put our names on our perfect woman poems. I quickly added my name to my poem but I fear that I may have been too late. He had blogged that he would be disqualifying those with out names. I hope he has not started his judging process yet. Quickly add your name, Jag, but it might be too late by now. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 2:10:00 AM
    .... agree (?) ..... or not agree (?) .... Good luck in the contest, Jag - well done! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)