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Perfect Sunbeams

I love you most precious jewel In the first kiss after absence is to be told As long as the stars remain above you When love kisses eternity glows striking the very earth moving Remains above you Crowning in your own world In one moment splitting hairs in time Pure is the legend of a vision promises to dance always In your shadow Co write Liam Mc Daid and David Bucknell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/22/2016 9:58:00 PM
stunning poem, Liam....................SKAT
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Date: 1/22/2016 10:46:00 AM
excellent write you two, fantastic
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Date: 1/22/2016 7:50:00 AM
A beautiful collaboration with a wonderful result. A seven to each, dear Liam and David!
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Date: 1/22/2016 6:47:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, dear Liam (and David) ! - I wishing you a blessed weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/22/2016 5:11:00 AM
Hi Liam n' David!Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,and this time in collaboration with your friend David.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!A most beautiful,heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding collaboration!Excellent imagery!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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