Pearl

As I was walking by the sea one day I came upon a fan of me For sure it was a rare sight to see As I stopped to ask, what was it doing Sitting there beside that deep blue sea He said, well, I'm sitting here waiting Just for you, So I sat down beside him To rest my toes in that deep blue sea As I stroked him ~ he purred like a kitten He opened up just for me, and I could see At last, I had found my PEARL of the sea It was my destiny waiting there just for me

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/22/2017 8:39:00 AM

Powerful read, intriguing as well. It capures the reader from the very start and I could not wait to see what happened. Nice choice of words and descriptions. Imagery delicious and a message that is very poignant. A masterpiece!

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 8/6/2013 6:37:00 AM

A little gem I found here - making me smile coming by today... thankyou for sharing and commenting on my Seaside Serenity - appreciated and catch you soon...

Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/23/2013 6:27:00 AM

Awwwwwww...nice poem! :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 6/23/2013 7:18:00 AM

Thank you Kate ;}

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/7/2012 10:34:00 PM

very nice poem friend Debbie...thanks for sharing this. have a nice day always!! (^_^)

Lynn Dolly

Date: 9/29/2012 11:51:00 PM

This is cute! I like it:)) Made me show my pearly whites..*smile*

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/29/2012 11:57:00 PM

Thank you Sharon,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/20/2012 1:42:00 PM

Just like a diamond in the rough you found your pearl by the sea. Nicely done. love phyl

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/22/2012 10:53:00 PM

Thank you Phyllis ;}

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2012 12:33:00 PM

lovable in all ways, debbie... such a poetic delight!..:) huggs

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/21/2012 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Nette,,,,, love & hugs ;}

Jack Ellison

Date: 9/20/2012 6:10:00 AM

A wonderful poem, dear Debbie... love it! Hugs and happy thoughts, Jack xox

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/20/2012 2:44:00 PM

thank you Jack,,,, hugs to you ;}

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 9/19/2012 11:21:00 PM

This poem is so beautiful!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/21/2012 5:37:00 PM

Thank you Vesna,,,, have a blessed weekend ;}

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/17/2012 1:44:00 AM

This has such a magical feel to it Debbie, you made me smile this morning :) enjoy the day ahead!!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/21/2012 5:35:00 PM

Thank you Wilma ;} have a blessed weekend ;}

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/16/2012 9:01:00 PM

This is a treasure to read Debbie....glad you found yours : ) Hugs

Don Johnson

Date: 9/15/2012 3:53:00 PM

LOVELY POEM HERE BABE...

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/15/2012 4:19:00 PM

Thank you Don ;}

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/10/2012 7:20:00 PM

WOW! Debbie this is so beautiful. I can just picture you there by the sea looking at the peral. Thanks for reading my poem and also for sharing thisa one. Lucilla

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/10/2012 9:39:00 AM

wonderfully written Debbie :) like it..have a nice day!!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/10/2012 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Maria ;} you have a blessed day .

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/10/2012 9:01:00 AM

Oh Debbie, this is a Pearl, a wondrous poem, so sublime in it's simplicity, love this ever so much.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/10/2012 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Harry ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2012 6:47:00 AM

So you believe in astral traveling? (from your comment on my last poem, I got the idea, that Have you done it??)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/10/2012 12:37:00 PM

Thank you for reading Audrea,,,, yes most defiantly I have done and do believe in astral travel ;}

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/6/2012 8:02:00 PM

A gem of a write, enjoyed this write.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/6/2012 5:07:00 PM

Interesting work that leaves me wondering..Great job in writing it..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/6/2012 1:26:00 PM

You don't always have to open an oyster to find a pearl. Good write.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/4/2012 4:12:00 PM

Dear Debbie, I enjoyed the vision of you. And the sea, that resides in all of us. Their's something always out there waiting for our dreamy eyes and heart. Glad you felt the beauty of the pearl and sea... have a nice day...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/4/2012 5:55:00 AM

This reads like some dreams I have had where a person becomes an animal and strange but beautiful things happen. Nice!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 9/4/2012 11:57:00 AM

Oh,,, Andrea, I like your dreams of metamorphosis,,,,thank you for reading ;}

Jack Horne

Date: 8/30/2012 2:09:00 PM

lovely write : )

Debbie Duncan
Date: 8/30/2012 4:18:00 PM

Thank you jack ;}