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Two gems settle in your chest; love and sympathy. Which prevents obstacles but not wisdom Quietness contributes to the rise and serenity. Times of jaunt and jubilation with no schism Many crowns gaze away from the ground. There are no swirls infused into the screen. The tones soften as the deep-hued downed. Feeling the slight shifts in his close keen. Inept and vain ambitions utter to fade away. Aim to unleash the resources of practice Allow us to care for our stallion today Inviting our perceptions to beat in consonance. He is again intensely in love with her. Coupling in the early era of kid's ethics to give Then comes the discovery of one's genuine fear The sense of what is precious to live Tulips bloom, forming a hazy layer of clever shine brightly with a light that is fast and safe as we get closer to our goal, a wave of pleasure Such a serene emotion and a pure spirit is not naif Written MAY 10, 2021 Workshop: Inviting The Muse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Date: 3/7/2023 8:09:00 AM
What a romantic introspection I found deep within your Ledger. Very nice going in my favorites list. Kindly A.S.
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Date: 5/12/2021 4:13:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender in the contest. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/14/2021 4:34:00 AM
Much obliged, for the kind words, dear Sara; it's continually inspiring to get your pleasant feedback// lasaad
Date: 5/11/2021 11:12:00 AM
A fantastic, well wrought poem, Lasaad. I wish you the best for the contest. :)
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Date: 5/11/2021 7:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Evelyn for your kind words and your wishes
Date: 5/11/2021 8:26:00 AM
A very lovely, well-written piece of work, Lasaad. I wish you well in the contest.
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:56:00 AM
Thanks, dear friend; I appreciate your visit to my page and your encouraging words. have a great day, with my best regards
Date: 5/11/2021 3:22:00 AM
A gallant profound poem that deals with the achievement of peace in one's heart. Excellently done, dearest Lasaad. Wish you the best in the contest. Blessings.
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thanks, dearest friend Demetrios, your visit to my page is really encouraging, have a great day and a peaceful mind
Date: 5/10/2021 10:54:00 PM
A treatise on peacefulness, but so hard to achieve with this war ridden planet. Lovely poem.
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:59:00 AM
Thanks, dear friend Victor; I appreciate your visit to my page and your encouraging words. have a great day, with my best regards

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