Pause

Into to the night I sway - stolen away entering stars scattered cross a naked sky with your beauty at my side I cried looking into those diamond eyes mesmerized can't help but sigh You take me places I've never been reaching heights ever close to the moon I swoon to sounds of your beating heart drape your cheek upon my chest darling soul to soul we'll pause and let the heavens do the rest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2016 11:49:00 PM

Isn't it cool to think our poetry is being used in classes???

Lu Loo

Date: 9/28/2016 7:37:00 AM

Tim your romance never ceases to amaze me...lovely poem :)-luloo

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/27/2016 10:44:00 PM

With a woman that beautiful and a moment as romantic as you described, Id pause the DVR too!!!! Nice write!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2016 6:15:00 PM

a gem of a romantic write Tim:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/27/2016 5:31:00 PM

How romantic dear, Tim! It seems as though the passing of time makes your heart more melodic! A seven!

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/27/2016 5:14:00 PM

Very romantic, Tim. Nothing like the moon and stars to set the mood. Poem has a very relaxing feel to it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2016 3:29:00 PM

Tim this is a gorgeous poem, and did you know we were linked again on the internet when a poem of each of us was displayed by a guy online? Here is the link. https://prezi.com/uxbqoa8gpkul/poem-project/ Maybe we can become a little famous if more and more people read prezi.com!!

Tim Smith
Date: 9/27/2016 3:43:00 PM

I just looked. I think they are being used for school presentations. Maybe a creative writing class.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/27/2016 3:19:00 PM

another mellow song from you, tim with a mix of alliteration... very nice!..huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 9/27/2016 3:39:00 PM

Thank you nette