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Patience

he was patience i could see that at first look no frown upon his face could anyone spot noticed how he held his mug of coffee close with swollen knuckled hands he was happy to oblige anyone for any favor they asked he was a patient man sitting at the same seat every day he came to eat his very same eggs over hard and sausage on the side he was a comfort the girls for he would put up with no nonsense to none that threatened no matter who they were for a year and 1 day i saw him in the same way and then on the 366th day he came no more he was a patient man they say he killed himself in the back of the store

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 12/7/2008 1:32:00 PM
What a sad fate...a sad ending to this poem. Well done with your writing, and congratulations on this one being featured this week! ~Carrie
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Date: 12/5/2008 5:35:00 PM
Dear Janetta - Congratulations on your featured write this week! Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 12/5/2008 5:34:00 PM
Dear Janetta. A heart wrenching story. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 12/2/2008 4:18:00 PM
WOW what an incredible tale you've written here Janetta ... you captured the essence of a tortured soul. We can only hope he is in a better place ... thanks for writing this and thanks to the Soup for selecting it to be featured this week. Congratulations to you!
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Date: 12/2/2008 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2008 4:25:00 PM
Wow. Horrible surprise ending. So sorry if this is true. Awesome poetry. Congrats on a great featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/1/2008 2:01:00 PM
What a sad and surprising end. A calm exterior does not always reveal the turmoil within. This is a powerful poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Karen
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Date: 12/1/2008 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations Janetta on this melancholy write "Patience" being featured. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/30/2008 10:09:00 PM
Janetta congrats on having this amazing poem/story featured this week - God Bless
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