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Passionate

You are there when I am happy and afraid, my passionate love for you will never fade, through days of sunshine and the rain, and during long, sleepless nights of pain. You spend time with me in winter and in spring, to you, wealth just does not mean a thing, and my looks do not matter to you at all, you are near me through summer and the fall. How much I love you, you will never know, you take me to any place that I want to go, whether it is to the country or the ocean, and you comfort my every little emotion. I hold on to you whenever I need to cry, as tears drop down on you from my eyes, you know me and my secrets very well, so, promise me that you will never tell. You bring warmth to me when it is snowing, and relief when threatening winds are blowing, no stronger love can ever be found, trust me, I know, I have looked around. You know you are truly my best friend, I know I can count on you in the end, When I am with you, I always feel free, you never try to change me, you just let me be. It is you that only my eyes can see, the perfect companion for a girl like me, you listen to every thought that I think, I am passionate about you, my paper and ink. (This is about my passion for poetry, just keep that in mind when reading!)

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Robert Nehls

Date: 1/11/2015 6:36:00 PM

Ah, paper and ink, our constant companion. I have had many jobs and many loves but the greatest love of all has been my writing. You have brought your version of that love to the hearts of those that read this beautiful poem. Such a pleasure to read, my friend.... Robert.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/15/2015 9:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Robert. I'm happy you enjoyed this poem, my friend... I too have other hobbies and interests, but none can make me feel the same passion that I have for writing. Poetry is almost like a close friend who is always there to listen and to comfort me when I need someone to talk to.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/27/2014 7:27:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this gem again. I also enjoyed reading your One Year Anniversary poem, you are such a thoughtful person.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/28/2014 12:34:00 AM

I'm happy that you've enjoyed reading these poems once again. Thank you for taking the time to do so, Rick. I appreciate your kind words, as always :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/23/2014 8:43:00 AM

Outstanding! Congratulations. Those of us who write can appreciate these words.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/25/2014 11:03:00 PM

Thank you, Richard! Your kind comments meant so much to me. :)

Skat A

Date: 3/20/2014 1:31:00 AM

KELLY, Congrats! Enjoyed your winning poem. Love ~SKAT~

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/20/2014 3:49:00 PM

SKAT, Thank you once again! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2014 11:46:00 PM

hello, Kelly.... It was nice seeing you on Nathan;s winning list... xox~ Linda

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/20/2014 3:31:00 PM

Hello, Linda. Thank you once again for your kind comments. It really means so much! :)

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/19/2014 7:48:00 AM

Wow, You out did yourself on this one Kelly. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Congrats on your win.....Hugs.....Roger

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/19/2014 3:51:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Roger. That really meant a lot to me! I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Hugs :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/19/2014 7:32:00 AM

Wonderful poetry and congrats on the fine win, kelly

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/19/2014 3:47:00 PM

Thank you once again, Dr. Ram! Your kind comments really meant a lot to me. :)

Robin Davis

Date: 11/12/2013 9:37:00 PM

This is a write every poet can relate to. We all have a passion for the words we put on paper that comes from our hearts and soul Nice job

Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2013 6:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your invitation to read your excellent poem my dear friend Kelly. A great honor for me. I love this so much & I was so grateful and so delighted to read it this evening. I do agree with you my dear friend that poetry is also our best and perfect companion and friend. This will go to my fave. Thank you so much as well for reading mine and the lovely comments. Have a great & blessed day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

John Posey

Date: 9/15/2013 6:09:00 PM

Most eloquent expression for your writing. It is, as you say, like a tonic that is soothing and almost medicinal.... Have your ever read "The Poets' Wine?" It puts another perspective on writing verses.... Jake

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 3:50:00 PM

Heartfelt emotions portrayed throughout Kelly. A comely narrative that I could succinctly relate to. Well composed.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/13/2013 4:48:00 AM

a very beautiful piece kelly i just got one right up your street middle earth have a beautiful day

Just That Archaic Poet

Date: 9/12/2013 4:01:00 PM

Very heartfelt; I felt your sincere appreciation for this person. You have a flair for rhyme and I encourage you to write even more. Just be mindful of rhythm, metre, and prosody. You have some wrinkles here and there, but they do not detract from the beauty of the piece. You pour out your emotions, raw and honest, and I appreciate that quality in a poet :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 5:22:00 PM

*got

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 5:21:00 PM

lol I'm sorry, I go so wrapped up in the other verses that I forgot what the last line said, but nonetheless, I felt the passion and appreciation, you made that strong and clear :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/12/2013 4:10:00 PM

This poem is actually about my passion for poetry! Hence, my last line, "I am passionate about you, my paper and ink." :)