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I taste your lips Sense your presence Dream while awake Suffer in silence Thinking of you Craving your touch Raging with fever Desire's too much Close my eyes In need of a rest Think of you more Mind's in distress Imagine your lips Warm with charm My aching body Longs for your arms Hunger your kiss Need you near Twenty-four seven I pray you hear I taste your lips Sense your presence Dream while awake Suffer in silence © Jack Ellison 2013

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Joy Wellington

Date: 1/27/2013 11:15:00 PM

A beauty Jack, filled with all the longing of a lovelorn soul. Nicely written my friend! Thanks for visiting. One love! Joy Wells

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/28/2013 5:35:00 AM

Thank you kindly my dear Joy! Hope you have a great day! Hugs, Jack xox

Carl Harris

Date: 1/27/2013 1:51:00 PM

This well and vivldly expressed poem, Jack, was a pleasure to read, largely because of your terse style throughout this fine poem whicn enhanced the intensity of your words. Carl.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/27/2013 3:30:00 PM

Wow! Those are very kind words my friend... thanks a bunch! Cheers, Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2013 9:24:00 PM

fantastic piece Jack .. full of intense lines of deep emotion and alluring passion .. so good to be back and read u luv..on slow mend but grateful to return luv ..

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/27/2013 6:59:00 AM

So great to see you back... you are loved here!!! Thank you for your sweet words this morning! Have a super day dear Linda... love ya! Huggs, Jack xox

Donna Jones

Date: 1/26/2013 5:27:00 PM

Well well that one about the cute bum got ya going? Hahahaha nice.......

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/26/2013 5:48:00 PM

LOVE cute bums... never too old! LOL

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2013 3:50:00 PM

Wow Jack! I like this departure, letting out your inner freak. The sexy side of Jack! Watch out ladies.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/26/2013 4:11:00 PM

All youse guys haven't got a chance now!!! No amount of charm will be enough!!! SORRY!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/26/2013 12:21:00 PM

Dear Jack,what a wonderful surprise to see something so romantic written by YOU! Beautifully written with a vigor worthy of a young man that you are! I am back, thanks God! Thank you for your comment.

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/26/2013 1:45:00 PM

Glad to hear from you again, my friend... thought you were taking a break! What! Surprised you eh, with a romantic poem! Thank you for the "young man" comment! LOL

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/26/2013 10:34:00 AM

Are you dreaming of lunch? Hoogies and subways are deliscious... Not to mention BLT's... That Bacon is the hardest to forget... It D.R.A.W.S... me like dracula's call... Help me... I can't resist... .... I'm coming... I'm coming... I'm lost... Yum... Yum...

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/26/2013 1:42:00 PM

No, silly! Have you been into the hard stuff again, my dear sweet Carol??? LOL Big huggeroonies, Jake xoxoxox