Paranoia

Are you the one with down cast eyes Slinging arrows on the sly? Are you the one with crooked speech The parasite come to leech? Are you the one with hidden plan That only you can understand? Are you the one behind the mask Who paints my world in overcast? Are you the one with savage touch Reaching out in greedy clutch? Are you the one with swivel mind To cease my voice and spirit bind? Are you the one with sweetest breath Come to claim untimely death? Are you the one?

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John Heck

Date: 11/30/2008 5:01:00 AM

Robin - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/15/2008 7:20:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win in the Mental Illness contest! Love, Shar

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/11/2008 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/1/2008 6:51:00 PM

Robin - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/30/2008 6:39:00 PM

Robin congrats on having your poetry featured this week God Bless

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/29/2008 12:50:00 PM

Your words are magic. This is a great poem and deserves to be featured. Good luck in the finals~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2008 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/28/2008 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations Robin on being featured with "Paranoia" this week. God Bless. Vince

Date: 10/27/2008 12:06:00 PM

Robin, The featured poems start on the home page. If you go to the bottom of the page there are numbers to click on to get to the rest of the featured pieces. These poems are rotated throughout the week so each gets some time on the home page. I hope that clarifies things for you. Again, congratulations on your honor. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/27/2008 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Date: 10/26/2008 5:39:00 PM

Fitting title for the poem. Nice use of rhyme. Congratulations on being featured this week. Keep on writing! Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/26/2008 3:53:00 PM

Great capture of the title. Congratulations Robin on your well deserved featured write. Love, Shar

Robin Dewalt

Date: 8/25/2008 5:34:00 PM

Thank you James, I'm deeply involved in another site. That's where I spend most my time. They have great feedback. When I get a chance to breathe, I will post some more.

James Foulk

Date: 8/25/2008 3:41:00 PM

welcome to poetrysoup and this was a great piece of poetry, you need to post some more you do have a gift.

Robin Dewalt

Date: 8/18/2008 11:49:00 AM

Thank you Stacey. I appreciate the feedback.