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Below is the poem entitled PAIN IS PERFECT which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Pain's almost beautiful
It can almost scream
The hurt is almost perfect
Too perfect for a dream

Nothing for now is perfect
No time is certain in my life
What does perfect mean
Who can only feel strife

Nothing to gain, nothing to lose
Something dead, something alive

I wail in the 'morrow
Gulping  this deadly pain
And bury this sorrow
Caught in my perfect world

Pain's almost beautiful
It can almost scream
The hurt is almost perfect
Too perfect for a dream

Caught in my last breath
I sink in a fake smile
Almost perfect like black
As the hurt crosses miles

I can almost drown it
Too perfect like rain
Perfect like tears black
The hurt almost remains 


Worst Poem #2 : P D's Contest

* from my high school notes, so darn imperfect!
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Great write... A masterpiece in my book. Congrats~A.O

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 7:14:00 PM
    I have to admit this is pretty bad. Congrats on honorable mention.

  1. Date: 5/5/2013 6:02:00 PM
    Oh Sweet, Nette,,, sorry you did not cut the bad poem award.. LOL, I think out of all the poems, this one + Kash the poets poem were the only good ones. I did like Leo's too funny... I gave you an HM, for even thinking this was bad.. I love the first 4 lines... you gave beauty to the word pain... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 3:35:00 AM
    Lol ....... my dear sweet friend ...... I did not meant all in one day ..... lol .... hugggs :)))

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:49:00 AM
    - Bravo Nette !!! - S-mail - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 2:33:00 PM
    So darn perfect! Smiles, xxx

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 1:47:00 PM
    I could see the beginnings of your talent within this write Nette! This might not be your best stuff but it is still a classic! You have done "perfectly" my friend! I loved this piece even if it was an earlier poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 4/29/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Hey...good bad poem :)))