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Pain Is Inevitable

I just want to write to you; everything I wish I could say. All the things I think about; every single day. Your presence is enchanting; it’s everything I need. You remind me of everything I wish I could be. We have felt the same pain; our hearts have been burnt. We have so much from the past and each other to learn. I can be myself around you; nothing from my soul to hide. You’re the only person I would ever let inside. Pain is inevitable; but with you that doesn’t matter. All I feel is you holding me together. I’d fall apart if it weren’t for you. Before you tripped into my life; I had no idea what to do. So thank you for everything that you have ever done for me. Without you, I could never be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/6/2010 9:27:00 AM
I wanted to say thank you for your comment on one of my poems. I was touch. Love Loyda
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Date: 9/6/2010 9:25:00 AM
Taylor congratulations! I love your poem. I have been there and know how it feels. Also want to comment your poem is simple,but so deep. It makes me think. Love Loyda
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Date: 7/4/2010 5:30:00 PM
I really can relate to this poem Thanks for sharing Congrats on having it featured. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:13:00 PM
lovely, congrats on this wonderful poem being featured this week
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:23:00 PM
I like the essence of this list poem and the message it sends. Congratulation of your poem being featured! Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:19:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA...
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:12:00 AM
Beautiful, Taylor. Never look back and say 'IF'. Life is to short. Good one, God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Taylor. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:31:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:23:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:17:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Taylor. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:44:00 PM
I love this!
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Date: 1/17/2010 8:06:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue your creative writings to share with us all.. enjoyed your words.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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