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I was choking for oxygen Couldn’t breathe What happened to me It is like things came back to the surface Hurting Crying pulling out hair Don’t stare it only makes chains flare Fire flaming higher falls Horse running stalls Stopped Joined in the lane Penetrating senses to blame What game Never heard of this before Hold my hand Secretly through the door More lies anguish defeat I was choking for oxygen Now I have landed on my feet!

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Date: 7/9/2016 4:09:00 AM
I'm glad you finally landed on your two feet, Elisheba!! Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 1/30/2016 3:43:00 PM
well expressed, Elisheba.... SKAT
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Date: 1/30/2016 10:44:00 AM
This was an experience of how life can sometimes overwhelm how choices can deter reasonable outcomes into a destined situation!
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