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Out of breath

It's so deep,the sea!                                                                                                        It's waters so cold that I could only feel                                                                            I just had to fall far below,knowing the unknown was waiting for me                                   Running from my life,I find peace in the quiet waters                                                         There is not a stir anywhere,only my frantic heartbeat                                                       The stars gaze down upon me while I struggle to breathe                                                   My life's memories crowd around me                                                                                They blur,only to fade away slowly                                                                                   As I feel my heartbeat slow,I'm reminded of how much I'm missing                                    How much I'm letting go                                                                                                  I feel the life slipping away from me                                                                                 It's so deep,the sea                                                                                                         It's waters so cold that I could only feel.

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  1. Date: 4/1/2014 6:11:00 AM
    So deep, this write. Great. Rick

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:23:00 PM
    PBK, awesome win..... Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 7:37:00 AM
    congratulations on your win xx

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:17:00 PM
    one can feel the sadness drowning them...powerful write...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 1:23:00 PM
    Beautiful , I love poems written about water , The Sea ..congratulation poetess !

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 4:47:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your winning poem, Priyanka! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 9:14:00 PM
    Priyanka, enjoyed the poem... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 6:32:00 PM
    Priyanka thank you for entering my contest; it was truly a tough call. This piece was wonderful.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Priyanka, You are an amazing writer... I love this poem, and how deep you took the imagery... Linda

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 2:41:00 PM
    A very nice emotional piece !

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 11:19:00 AM
    - Deep and sad written, but a good poem ! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)