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Below is the poem entitled OUR LIVES which was written by poet Demetrios Trifiatis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Our lives, 
The waters of a river
Rushing from their source to
The sea,
Obediently following fate’s  
Unable to let themselves 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
     21 APRIL 2013

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 8:27:00 AM
    Very beautiful , how our lives resemble the waters of a river. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 7:03:00 AM
    Aliakmonas! Acheloos! Pineiós! BRAVO, winding fate....

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:46:00 PM
    A profound way of expressing the nature of life in artful tones... just lovely,demetrios..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 10:36:00 AM
    Wonderful truth depicted by adoration, tallying the human life with the waters of rivers. Loved much, my friend, always bl

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/21/2013 12:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment!
  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:59:00 AM
    This is a truthful and brilliant write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this incredible poem this morning! What an enlightening piece, quite the noble poem! Great Work!!

    Trifiatis Avatar Demetrios Trifiatis
    Date: 4/21/2013 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much! Take good care, friend!