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Our Lives

OUR LIVES Our lives, The waters of a river Resemble, Rushing from their source to The sea, Obediently following fate’s Waterway, Unable to let themselves Free! © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 APRIL 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 4/22/2013 8:27:00 AM

Very beautiful , how our lives resemble the waters of a river. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Judy Konos

Date: 4/22/2013 7:03:00 AM

Aliakmonas! Acheloos! Pineiós! BRAVO, winding fate....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/21/2013 2:46:00 PM

A profound way of expressing the nature of life in artful tones... just lovely,demetrios..:) huggs!

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/21/2013 10:36:00 AM

Wonderful truth depicted by adoration, tallying the human life with the waters of rivers. Loved much, my friend, always bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/21/2013 12:19:00 PM

Thank you very much for your thoughtful comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/21/2013 5:59:00 AM

This is a truthful and brilliant write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this incredible poem this morning! What an enlightening piece, quite the noble poem! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/21/2013 8:07:00 AM

Thank you so much! Take good care, friend!