Our Kiss

The night fell all around me sunshine washed away by salty drops dripping down onto my pillow blurring my mind I saw visions beautiful visions Bright as day Her light was there to guide me cross around her neck white flower in her hair cascading gently downward upon the bottom of her neck taking my hand we walk barefoot in the sand Her touch her sweet touch pulling me close her soft pink lips coming close oh so close pulling me in feelings so right Our lips touch pure bliss what a kiss releasing me tip of her tongue encircling mine emotions exploding losing track of time a moment, a lifetime I will never forget setting me free letting me be me

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/27/2016 2:37:00 AM

Congrats Tim, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Sonia Walker

Date: 7/26/2016 9:25:00 AM

Tim, congratulations on making the win. There must be romance in the air.

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/25/2016 11:24:00 AM

Now that's one for the memory banks...Congratulations Tim

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/25/2016 1:22:00 AM

Congratulations. I like this. Well done

Just James

Date: 7/25/2016 12:59:00 AM

Wonderful write congratulations

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/24/2016 7:43:00 PM

Now that's a kiss! Congrats on the kiss and the win!

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2016 6:23:00 PM

Awesome win Tim....skat

Royal Ninja

Date: 7/24/2016 5:55:00 PM

Nice Tim. Thank you. Royal

Ty Townsend

Date: 12/26/2014 1:09:00 AM

A simple kiss from lips of that special someone is always a moment so divine. You captured the beauty of it in your poem.

Ninette Carey

Date: 12/9/2014 8:25:00 AM

May Life Bring to You Those Lips! Tim! Beautifully Written!! <3

Tim Smith
Date: 12/9/2014 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Nina...I hope so too....hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/29/2014 1:04:00 PM

Wow Tim! That's a very romantic poem you've written here to put it mild. Very beautiful! I enjoyed it! A 7 from me! Have a great day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2014 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Dorian my good friend...hugs Tim

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/29/2014 8:07:00 AM

Subtly romantic Tim! Longings everlast n time makes that happen! Fantastic write!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2014 12:02:00 PM

Thank you Upma my dear friend.... Hugs Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 11/29/2014 7:26:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic ... a special kiss between two people lost in deep attraction. Hope this is inspired by a new love that leads from the past to the future! // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2014 12:01:00 PM

Yes Paul a special kiss inspired by love

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/29/2014 1:37:00 AM

Precious and blissful moments like that illumine the road of one's life and help him go through the dark hours that may come! A kiss as this is the exclamation point of the heart. May all your life offer you such moments my dear friend, Tim. Wonderfully romantic, incomparably beautiful!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2014 11:59:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios my dear friend.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/28/2014 11:11:00 PM

Wow, Tim...that must have been some kiss. There is a song that goes..."If you wanna know if he (she) loves you so...it's in her kiss! ;) Good one, my good friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2014 11:58:00 AM

It is a kiss worth remembering Eileen... A lot can be told through a kiss...hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2014 10:59:00 PM

Like Mystic so eloquently said: these words are like a string of pearls!!

Tim Smith
Date: 11/29/2014 11:56:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea...hugs Tim

Faith Carmichael

Date: 11/28/2014 5:54:00 PM

This is wonderful! Beautifully written

Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2014 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Faith...hugs Tim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/28/2014 5:31:00 PM

I deeply enjoyed the fluid stream of your affectionate thoughts, tim... the theme of love prevails; well done.. huggs

Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2014 5:33:00 PM

Thank you nette...huggs

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2014 5:25:00 PM

: ) I' m flavouring and favo(u)ring this beauty.Extremely Romantic!Outstandingly B!eautiful.... Im glad those salt drops are gone.. I love the happy ending Its all about the Kiss-WoW!!!YSB

Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2014 5:30:00 PM

I like that flavor... Thank you Charma. :.) ND

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2014 5:19:00 PM

wow:-) hugs jan x

Tim Smith
Date: 11/28/2014 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Jan.....hugs Tim