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Our Fight

Clouds of doubt hovered Over our heads They multiplied and grew to Mistrust That brewed into a storm of anger which Unleashed its rage in Thunder of words and Lightning of gestures. In a while The exhausted tempest subsided Clouds dissipated The sun of trust hesitantly appeared It grew stronger and brighter, Reason prevailed, Feelings warmed up, Harts palpitated, Arms opened wide And We threw ourselves into Each other's embrace Finding thus shelter in Our love Hence Fearing the coming of a A new storm, NO MORE! © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 OCTOBER 2014

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Robert Lindley

Date: 10/13/2014 7:28:00 AM

Just found this my friend. Big congrats on your fine write being chosen for POTD.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/13/2014 7:43:00 AM

Thank you, Robert! Better late than never, as they say! Very kind of you!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 8:26:00 PM

Belated Congratulations on your piece being the poem of the day.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/13/2014 6:56:00 AM

Merci, Maurice! It doesn't matter at all! Thank you, very kind of you!

Paul Smith

Date: 10/10/2014 2:26:00 PM

cool!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2014 1:31:00 PM

- A good choice poem of the day - Congrats, my friend Demetrios ! // A-L

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 1:47:00 PM

Thank you my dear, Anne Lise, you so gracious!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/10/2014 8:33:00 AM

touching all senses dear pal beautifully penned i tip my hat your way well done

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 9:42:00 AM

Thank you my good Irish friend, Liam, for your kind words!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 10/10/2014 7:35:00 AM

Demetrious, congratulations on being chosen as poem of the day. Verlena

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thank you Verlena for your kind gesture!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2014 2:29:00 AM

incredibly powerful imagery of weather and stormy relationships - fabulous write many congrats on poem of the day:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2014 9:04:00 AM

I think it should be mailed to everyone on the site Demetrios it will make people more aware of the poem and the fact this honour is there:-) hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 7:21:00 AM

Thank you my friend, Jan, for your visit and for being the bearer of the good news about the poem of the day! I didn't know anything. I thing they should advise the honored poets by e-mail. Thank you for the great comment as well. I appreciate it!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/10/2014 1:55:00 AM

Congrats on POD....Tim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 7:22:00 AM

Thank you, Tim, for the congratulations on being the POD poet!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2014 12:26:00 PM

- No love storm here ...... but, a real autumn storm with much wind and thunder - A proper autumn day as powerfully as in your great poem, dear friend Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2014 12:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne Lise, for your visit and great comment!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/9/2014 2:09:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/9/2014 5:24:00 AM

Ravi, my friend, how wonderful to receive your visit and comment it is. Thank you!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/8/2014 7:09:00 PM

Growing up with my friends we did something we called "slander Sunday". Every Sunday you could get off you chest anything you like about one of your friends and nothing would be held against you...Today these guys are still near and dear to me...we are like brothers and nothing gets to any of us...we all have an even temperament...cheers

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/9/2014 5:25:00 AM

Thank you for the story, Tim!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/8/2014 3:51:00 PM

Demetrios, there is a William Blake poem "A Poison Tree." In it, he says when he quarrels with a friend, they talk it out and everything is better. But when he quarrels with a foe, his anger only grows from lack of communication. The wisdom in your poem reminded me of this classic. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 4:25:00 PM

I will check it, dear Carolyn! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment. I much appreciate it!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 1:12:00 PM

Another beautiful write my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 1:16:00 PM

Another beautiful visit from you my friend, Maurice! Merci!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/8/2014 8:16:00 AM

This is such a loving n humble write Demetrios! I m touched! Great work!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 11:45:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma, for your kind visit and your heartfelt comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/8/2014 4:23:00 AM

My dear poet....You write to beautifully. I'm touched by every word of this tender and truthful write. Me agapi

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 5:16:00 AM

Thank you, Eileen, you are always gracious and kind!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/8/2014 3:25:00 AM

Demetrios . . . Das ist ganz wunderbar mein guter freund und ist ein hervorragendes Gedicht!! Ich habe dieses Gedicht sehr schoen gefunden sein!! Enjoyed it immensely -- and it is an immense "7" as well. My continued best wishes, Gary.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/8/2014 5:20:00 AM

Danke. aber, mein gutter freund, wir mussen auch etwas auf English schreiben!Ha-ha! Thank you so much my good friend, Gary, your appreciation makes me very happy!