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Open Wide

On Merit alone, I could swallow the World,
But lethargy, 'tis all I've conducted
My Rage itself, could darken the sky
(Feel me explode, like a volcano erupted!)

To my Failures, fretfully chained
(The effects of the drugs, they've activated)
Senses enhanced, perspectives changed,
And new Revelations to be contemplated...

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  1. Date: 1/5/2014 1:47:00 PM
    Chan The Man This is some powerful and deep writing. I hope the rage, anger, drugs and inner failures have disappeared. I never want you feeling like this. You are a lot better than the man you described. Thanks for the awesome and concerned comment on my Raped poem. Hugs and Love

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    Date: 1/6/2014 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for being the first to review so many of my lonely pieces, Sweet Pea. Much love and hugs to you <3