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One More

How I wish to live a life, like any child of naughty five Cry and smile with an empty heart, and sleep at night without hurts Ah! how many springs passed through me, still I longed to have one more.

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 9:04:00 PM

Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/9/2020 12:23:00 AM

Thank you Funom..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/3/2020 5:14:00 AM

How admirable a wish it is my friend, Jenish. Certainly the heart envies such innocence! Beautiful writing. Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/5/2020 12:33:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your delightful words..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/30/2020 11:37:00 PM

Ha, ha. It certainly looks innocent...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:23:00 AM

Where I lost my innocence? Maybe under the dirty pile of memories.. Takecare Gershon..

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/30/2020 1:02:00 PM

I miss being a child too! Those days were so simple. Lovely words Jenish :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/31/2020 2:20:00 AM

I miss too..Under the wings of healthy parents, I want to run once more without fear.. Thank you..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 5/29/2020 12:32:00 AM

A lovely poem. I wrote a poem called"I wish I could be a child again" as there's nothing more pure and innocent as a child so beautifully captured in your poem Jenish. That's why we don't want our children to grow up too quickly...

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/29/2020 12:36:00 AM

True..But you are so lucky to have childhood 6 times..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/28/2020 7:22:00 AM

Oh, the joy of innocence in childhood! Beautifully done, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/29/2020 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Vijay..