One Might

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ONE MIGHT

PART OF MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME THIS MORNING. (c)

One might escape punishment, when he commits a crime But unable is to hide himself from consciousness sublime. (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 02 August 2016

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/2/2016 12:54:00 PM

the conscience is out light-path, demetrios... very inspiring message..huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/3/2016 5:51:00 AM

Yes, it is dear, nette! Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment!

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/2/2016 6:52:00 AM

Hi Demetrios, Well said.I agree, one can commit many crimes but they escape their conscious. Your garden is beautiful :-) Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2016 7:44:00 AM

They can never escape their consciousness my dearest, Alexis! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2016 6:44:00 AM

- Repeating injustice ..... will be punished in the end - Good morality requires justice - Great written, dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2016 7:45:00 AM

True dear, Anne-Lise! God bless you my dearest for your precious visit and comment!

Ronald Kent

Date: 8/2/2016 6:06:00 AM

Short and to the point. Again the pics are enjoyable as well. I notice a watering system it has to be something to see.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2016 7:48:00 AM

I am the watering system my dear friend, Ronald. I water them each time they are thirsty, one by one and they respond in beauty! I have got about 300 pots, small and large. Thank you my kind friend for your visit and comment!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/2/2016 5:21:00 AM

A truth laid on a beauty bowl ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/2/2016 5:48:00 AM

You so kind my friend, Probir. God bless you!