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One Huge Flame

A flame was lit in decades past, and no one wants to see it last, for global warming is its name. Some tell us we'll have much to rue while others argue that’s not true. The biggest culprits take NO blame! We speak of it, yet still we stall. . . Bad habits must be changed by all before this earth is one huge flame. Written 6/13/14 by Andrea Dietrich for the Light a Flame Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/21/2014 8:42:00 PM

This has inspired me to write a poem I have been thinking about for a while. This is such an important topic to me. An excellent poem.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/10/2014 9:28:00 PM

Getting cold up this way and yes we must change some ways if we want to save the earth. love phyl

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/25/2014 8:53:00 AM

I could use some global warming up here in Michigan this summer....This morning was another late July sweatshirt/jacket day! Last week it was a low of 42 degrees! Mind you, I just moved here from Florida. I do like the passion in your poetic platform here San AndreaS! You should research "Chem-trails in the sky" not comtrails, "CHEM-Trails"...scary stuff that nobody seems to wanna pay attention to. Let me know if you have time to research that subject. I posted a poem on it a while back.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/8/2014 6:13:00 PM

Bang-A-Rang this message is sounded loud and clear in this marvelious write of yours it's totally cool lady poet. This should be the message heard around the world, a flame carried thoughout the lands Let us make a stand and save our planet from the truth global warning is a fact not fiction. This is a winner in my book keep it up I'll be back for more. cheri

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/22/2014 2:48:00 PM

Well done, Andrea, and such a different take on the flame. I have truly enjoyed what Nette's challenge brought out of those who entered.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/22/2014 1:13:00 PM

Big congrats on your fine win!!!! BBBBBBRAVOOOOOOOOOOO

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/20/2014 11:07:00 PM

Well chosen theme Andrea ! Loved ur take ,, high time we all act n not just ponder,, congrats on great win !

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/20/2014 6:17:00 PM

Good one Andrea.' great to read you today, I see you seem to be putting out a lot; since I last looked..'

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2014 3:42:00 PM

a call to action with stunning display of undue environmental consequences... a daring, noteworthy work, andie.. cheers for the fine win in my challenge.. huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2014 3:24:00 PM

very well said Andrea. Hugs on a great win. Jan xxxx

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 6/20/2014 1:56:00 PM

Great write in an unexpected direction.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/20/2014 1:47:00 PM

Another clever and unique take on the contest theme, Andrea. I'm with you all the way on your call to save our planet. Congrats on your win! // paul

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/20/2014 1:27:00 PM

Poems are so powerful when we write about things we are passionate about.. Congrats on a great win my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/20/2014 12:25:00 PM

So very well said, Andrea. Congrats for the win also. Mohan

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/18/2014 8:16:00 PM

Great subject to shine the light upon and this well written write dazzles!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/18/2014 3:13:00 PM

BRAVA!!! Andrea for this wakeup call aimed at everyone on the planet! So well written and succinct! Spread this one around to those sites for those who are trying to do something about the problem. It will certainly be appreciated there. A wise little gem!

Justin Bordner

Date: 6/18/2014 12:34:00 AM

Aewsome statement in the wisdom of Poetry Andrea! Equally awesome is your vivid inner line rhyming, one of my favorite techniques. Preach on Poet! J.A.B.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 6/16/2014 6:44:00 PM

You are a master Poet

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 6/16/2014 6:41:00 PM

You are a master Poet

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/16/2014 10:37:00 AM

love this Andrea,,, global warming, not for those, that live for the day,and make money out of it...like your poem,, an highlight indeed....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/16/2014 4:55:00 AM

Way to go for the contest..Enjoyed reading your entry..We all need to do more to protect our planet for sure..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 6/16/2014 1:50:00 AM

Great write Andrea...hugs

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/15/2014 9:37:00 PM

I think that we are in trouble here and we should be alert to it. Yu sound out a good warning. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Cherl Dunn

Date: 6/15/2014 8:18:00 PM

Love the topic and your ideas are interesting, your so right on the button with this wonderful poem. It's true that 99 percent of the population don't want to admit any blame for the problem of global warming. We must change how we live and think before it's to late. I enjoyed reading your thoughts on this subject, I believe the same way lady. I've taught my son to be aware of this, every year we take something old and make something new from it. I wish others would do something like this, cheri

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/15/2014 6:00:00 PM

:) i like this another unique turn of the contest.. :D!!! and more it's about our mama earth.. :) i really wish other people will care more.. :) here, maybe if no street cleaners this will be a wide area of junk.. as most just throw anywhere they like..... your first and 2nd line explores rather implies a lot of subjects i can think of.. :) but your third line exposed what you have chosen .. :)