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One Day's Magic

humanity wakes to a day bright with sunshine all fighting has ceased our hearts are wise and loving and evil cannot be found For Freddie Vee's One Day's Magic Poetry Contest

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/11/2017 9:41:00 PM

Wow, funny I choose this one, because it's not ((( all fighting has ceased))) because astrology says it's because the sun is in Leo. And Leo stands up and says " Ya, I'm all that" :) Trump & Kim jing un :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/1/2014 5:47:00 AM

"...and evil cannot be found" Did you check under the couch? Great Tanka Very Much.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/27/2014 12:15:00 PM

IF ONLY so much hope shown in this poem. Love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:52:00 PM

love it Andrea, this is the only magic we need... Now hurry up and shine this my way... LOL...Linda

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/8/2014 6:03:00 AM

this is the very same day that MONKEYS FLY OUT OF MYAZZ ! butt, and I do mean butt eye wish this day would come real FAST!

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/7/2014 3:07:00 PM

Congrats on angreatnwin, Andrea!.. BEAUTIFUL thoughts!.. Hugs.. Arlene

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 7/6/2014 9:15:00 AM

You too are delivering a profound message. I'm new to Tanka, but yours is a illuminating piece> Congrats on a well deserved win

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/6/2014 8:14:00 AM

A fine win on your beautiful write my friend!! Big congrats !!!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/5/2014 8:52:00 PM

Andrea, a great win on your beautiful Tanka. Mohan

Jack Horne

Date: 7/5/2014 3:15:00 PM

great tanka, my friend - I struggle with this form, as you know, but you make it look so easy!!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 7/5/2014 6:37:00 AM

What a beautiful and magical thought!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/5/2014 4:06:00 AM

Beautiful tanka Andrea ! I loved it ,, congrats on huge win !

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/4/2014 5:45:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this fine poem

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 7/4/2014 4:18:00 PM

A most magically day that would be. Congrats on an excellent write and win. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 7/4/2014 4:18:00 PM

This is beautiful...but will we ever be allowed just one day of peace and love? Congratulations on your top win, Andrea. // paul

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/4/2014 2:45:00 PM

What a wonderful wish and a well deserved win ;)

Len Gasun

Date: 7/4/2014 12:57:00 PM

This is magically beautiful my very dear friend Andrea. I'm so happy and grateful to read this splendid piece tonight. Thank u so much and many congratulations on your great win! Many hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/3/2014 8:05:00 PM

The Day when Humanity stops looking for Evil. An altruistic Vision Andrea. J.A.B.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 7/2/2014 6:03:00 PM

We truly want this magic in my country now. We are tired of the endless bomb blast there. I love this poem very much. I will do a poem on this title too.

Elaine George

Date: 6/30/2014 2:22:00 AM

Sensational Tanks, Andrea. Sure to top the winners list. bfn Elaine

Matthew Anish

Date: 6/29/2014 11:15:00 PM

You paint a utopian picture here. Doesn't seem like the world as we know it today. You stuck to the 575 77 tanka format - which is all to the good. Now tell me what you think of my latest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish