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One Christmas Eve

Attempting to await St. Nick, small Ted lay trembling with excitement in his bed, one Christmas Eve while all his siblings slept (their promise to stay up with him unkept). Like smoke that rose above his house that night and drifted to the moon, his thoughts took flight. He wondered (and he couldn't comprehend) how dear old Santa ever could descend the chimney to his house when at its base were sparks that sputtered in the fireplace. So as he pondered what St. Nick might do, he left his room just as the clock struck two. He tiptoed to the stairs where he could see a figure on the rug nearby the tree. . . Midst wrapping paper, boxes and a tangle of ribbons knelt his mother. At an angle, the firelight warmly touched her face. Her hair showed flecks of sugar. Ted stooped on a stair transfixed. . . The sugar looked like angel's dust! And then he understood how long she must have worked because the scent of cooking pies was proof of it. Ted suddenly felt wise. . . He realized how sweet pies could appear like magic every Christmas. All was clear! A single mom, this angel in his sight began to hum the tune to "Silent Night." Unseen, Ted lingered on the stair, content in knowing his St. Nick was heaven sent. (not sure if this is the "epic" you had in mind, Leonora. but this is my submission for your contest! Merry Christmas)

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Date: 12/6/2015 4:23:00 PM
Very and wonderfully imaginative ... CayCay
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:16:00 PM
Andrea, this is a wonderfully penned piece of poetry. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 7/14/2014 7:33:00 AM
aww this brought tears to my eyes, what a special poem! I love it!
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:46:00 PM
ANDREA, Congrats, with your EPIC CHRISTMAS is winning poem... TAKE CARE :) ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/7/2014 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea...a masterpiece by you...a perfect way for Christmas magic to become Christmas memories forever...
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Date: 1/3/2014 3:24:00 PM
now ted knows... lovely write till the end. andie.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 1/3/2014 1:00:00 PM
beautiful Andrea a fine pen congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/3/2014 10:21:00 AM
such a beautiful write Andrea ...congrats on your win
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Date: 1/3/2014 6:56:00 AM
Andrea, This is a wonderful poem and should have taken a first place in my opinion. But we take what we can get. Congrats on a wonderful win....Hugs...Roger
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Date: 1/3/2014 4:20:00 AM
Enjoyed your epic poem and congrats on the win, Andrea
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Date: 1/3/2014 2:18:00 AM
My heartfelt congratulations my dearest friend, Andrea ! And, this is yours! You're already there my very dear friend! Biggest hugs to you! Thank you so much for your support. Happy, Happy New Year and Advance Happy Three Kings! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 10/3/2013 4:26:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. I love it.
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Date: 3/6/2013 9:37:00 PM
Dear Andrea, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2010.I see Another Congratulations on this well deserved Featured POEM. I am with Phyllis on this Holiday Season. YOU have captured the Essence of Christmas through Ted's Eyes and Heart. Superb Pen With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 2/5/2013 12:26:00 PM
This sure evokes the excitement and happiness during this vibrant time of year. A most heartwarming piece. Always, Laura
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:31:00 PM
Awww, what a lovely piece, my friend. I thought I'd try reading your oldest stuff and found it much easier than I'd expected to
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:32:00 AM
This is an awesome write for the Christmas season. AS you know not my favorite time of year. Phyl
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Date: 12/2/2010 1:38:00 PM
So heart warming a beautiful read for the holiday.My friends on PS are one of the reasons I keep writing cause you'll read and leave such wonderful comments on my work.So thank you very much Andrea for those terrific comments !!!!!!keep-em comming. HAVE A MERRY CHRISTMAS Your friend Teresa
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:52:00 AM
ANDREA, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/19/2010 2:09:00 PM
congrats on your feature! This poem is very sweet <3
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:07:00 AM
Zounds and odds bodkins! The soupers must really like this poem. I know I certainly do. More congrats. Love, Dave
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:01:00 PM
I did what you did, Andrea, I went to the end of the line for a poem. Lo, I have commented on this poem long ago. Boy, howdy! This masterpiece was sho worth another read! Love, Dave
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Date: 3/22/2010 9:15:00 PM
christmas eve is always somewhat a magical day. well its okay to get your dance on anytime. . lol.my mom would make sure we saw her dancing. she would dance like she was in "our" time.
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Date: 3/5/2010 12:08:00 PM
Wonderful enjoyed Iam a sucker for X-mas all year . Believe it or not I still watch all kinds of x-mass movies .It always brings out the sheer in me all year. In a way you can say I am like TED . Always believing x-mass is a gift from GOD...I LOVED YOUR POEM..
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Date: 1/17/2010 3:30:00 AM
Very nice! I have a christmas eve poem you may want to read! :) (:
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