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One Kiss

WITH JUST ~ONE KISS I rise, like fire in your eyes. Feel the burn, as I discharge my flames. Like Frankenstein, I will make you come to life. Out of the sea, I rise like the tide. Move in slow like the moon, provoking, your endless passionate doom. A giant wave you can't control, sinking you like a ship below. I'm the fever burning deep inside, in and out at 105%. Like a drum beat from the wild west, I'm the rhythm pressing up against your chest. Re-sizing the power of the blazing sun, blistering your complexion till my job is done. I'm the force you find in number 8, a hurricane, destroying at an atomic rate. I'm the south and north pole, the magnet that attracts your glow. The mass that holds your gravity in place. a body that magnitudes the smile on your face. I'm the exhaust, running through your system. I'm dangerous, and beautiful like the open shores, One kiss will lead you wanting, more and more. Passing like the wind, holding on to my bliss, Kiss after Kiss. Lip against lip, Be prepared for all of this. by;p.d.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/7/2016 5:34:00 PM
Love this and want to use it for a display...plz check messages....
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Date: 4/30/2014 3:35:00 PM
The monkey sent me....I love the passion
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:55:00 PM
Linda These words are full of passion and feeling. You penned a write so vivid and real, it takes the reader in a world of love and emotion. Nice job thanks for the sweet comment on my Masterpiece poem Hugs
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:13:00 AM
Hi, my everdearest sis! I've read your lovely 3latest msgs/comments. Million thanks & hugging you so lovingly again. I've read this very romantic & stellar poem of urs once again a while ago & it was where I supposed to reply on your comments when I suddenly disconnected; so I came back & say over n over again that i'm your #1 fan, my only greatest poet & fave always & 4ever. Always my great honor to read your stellar poem. Biggest hugs! Missing u always your sis,Leo
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Date: 9/7/2013 12:48:00 PM
Amazing poem!
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Date: 1/2/2013 8:56:00 AM
Hello my dearest sis Linda! How are you? I hope you're doing well and great! I'm missing you on the soup. I hope you'll come when I'm here. I'm reading this extremely beautiful and passionate poem of yours. I extremely love it! Your poems are my favorites and are really the best/ greatest and the source as well. I hope and wish that you'll post a new poem for this year. Missing you my dearest idol and sis-ie! Sending you my love and big hugs! love always and forever, Leonora
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Date: 9/16/2012 3:22:00 AM
passionate! lovely poem
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Date: 5/16/2012 11:21:00 AM
oh wow! I love this! It reminds me of my fantasies and also that one girl I told you about - the kissy one! I wonder if you would be as dangerous as she was...
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:17:00 PM
uh, did I miss what others been reading? Hellboy, Frankenstein, Giant Squid, Sitting Bull, Coronary, Storm (X-Men), Santa Clause, Crocodile Dundee, Lightning Bug, The Blob, Manifold, and Rip-Tide, all got together for one hec of a poker game!!! Hehe...But seriously, it stands to reason the a "burnt of on love" type of person like myself can glimpse a spark still left in my heart from reading such desirable poem you wrote, Linda....ty for that...and, Wink
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Date: 5/1/2012 9:18:00 PM
hmm, I meant, "Burnt out on love"...sorry, typo
Date: 4/15/2012 5:34:00 PM
I love it! The mass that holds your gravity in place. Great write!
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Date: 4/5/2012 2:43:00 AM
very sweet write girl. :) i love it. i wanna kiss someone right now. lol. :)
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Date: 4/4/2012 10:24:00 AM
Mmmmm. So I'm naughty guy. 8 years of catholic grammar school so you do the math. Naughty is as naughty does my sweet.
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:46:00 PM
Loved the poem,very good,try to write good ones like that but was never good in english in school,thanks for you'r comment on mine,may piece be in you'r heart.
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Date: 3/15/2012 7:15:00 PM
PD, sorry i thought you're a male hahaha! You rule!!
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Date: 3/6/2012 11:59:00 AM
love this one PD one of my favorites
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:18:00 AM
A great piece shows that Intimate need not be graphic. - Chuck
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Date: 2/4/2012 9:28:00 PM
This sure is a very passionate poem pd, love it. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/17/2012 2:15:00 AM
Thank you pd for your kind comment. Maureen
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Date: 1/8/2012 11:23:00 PM
wow pd..this was so heartt racing one my friend..keep writing like this...u have a very unique flair ...
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Date: 12/27/2011 10:20:00 AM
Smile ˜ I wouldn't have it any other way nor would I ever expect anything less from such flames of beauty ˜ 'Kissss After Kissss' * The kisss of light & eternal is its shores * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Linda ˜ I love the burning passion I find inside this wonderful verse & I completely believe * Your Beauty * Can fulfill every joyful moment amid this beautiful dream ˜ 'Muy Magnifico * My Love, Always & Forever;'" John!:) ˜
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Date: 12/10/2011 7:37:00 PM
completely blown away by the flow and passion in this poem....absolutely loved it! <3
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Date: 1/1/2012 11:09:00 AM
* "YOU LOOK SOOOO BEAUTIFUL JASMINE * I WOULD LOVE TO TASTE YOUR LUV!!" *
Date: 12/9/2011 2:08:00 AM
I love this poem, full of emotion and shows great confidence too. Love the way you have expressed everything. You are a wonderful writer truely x
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Date: 12/6/2011 11:07:00 PM
Incredible.......you gave me chills.......doesn't happen often.......incredible!!!!!!!
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Date: 12/27/2011 12:19:00 AM
Smile ˜ "You Give Me Chill's Baby!!":) ˜
Date: 12/3/2011 12:05:00 AM
passing by the lip on lip, passion flows like hip to hip, and wonder fills the sky, great poetry i espy....
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Date: 11/29/2011 8:20:00 PM
Hi p.d. Glad you liked my 'Senator Foghorn'; it was fun to write. Your 'ONE KISS' is scorching! Wow! I felt drawn into it. ~James MeanderthalMan
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